From owner-cvs-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Sep 30 18:18:54 2003 Return-Path: Delivered-To: cvs-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 890D516A4BF; Tue, 30 Sep 2003 18:18:54 -0700 (PDT) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (repoman.freebsd.org [216.136.204.115]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1AC9C43FF2; Tue, 30 Sep 2003 18:18:54 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from chern@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.12.9/8.12.9) with ESMTP id h911IrXJ044364; Tue, 30 Sep 2003 18:18:53 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from chern@repoman.freebsd.org) Received: (from chern@localhost) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.12.9/8.12.9/Submit) id h911IrXC044362; Tue, 30 Sep 2003 18:18:53 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from chern) Message-Id: <200310010118.h911IrXC044362@repoman.freebsd.org> From: Chern Lee Date: Tue, 30 Sep 2003 18:18:53 -0700 (PDT) To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org X-FreeBSD-CVS-Branch: HEAD Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics chapter.sgml X-BeenThere: cvs-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: CVS commit messages for the doc and www trees List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 01 Oct 2003 01:18:54 -0000 chern 2003/09/30 18:18:53 PDT FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics chapter.sgml Log: - Revise some comma usage - Revise wording of some sentences - Use and tags - Follow FDP on continuous repetition of &man.command.#; - Write out numbers under 10 - Show an example of complete output of "ls -l" command - Mention after successfully logging in, you will see the MOTD, and the command prompt - Remove misleading comment about how chmod ### can only "set and assign" permissions, but not remove them. - "CPU time evenly to each user" -> "CPU time fairly to each user" - "permissions stored as two octets" -> "permissions stored as three octets" Sponsored by: FreeBSD Mall, Inc. Revision Changes Path 1.113 +46 -29 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.sgml