Date: Mon, 5 May 2014 18:37:48 +0000 (UTC) From: Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r44763 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports Message-ID: <201405051837.s45Ibm18035809@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: bcr Date: Mon May 5 18:37:48 2014 New Revision: 44763 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44763 Log: Rephrase a section from the last commit to avoid the use of "you" and "simply". Noticed by: wblock Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml Mon May 5 16:03:30 2014 (r44762) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml Mon May 5 18:37:48 2014 (r44763) @@ -202,9 +202,10 @@ for security issues related to the application or install <package>ports-mgmt/portaudit</package>. Once installed, type <command>portaudit -F -a</command> to check all installed - applications for known vulnerabilities. If you are using - <application>pkg</application>, the audit functionality is - built in. Simply run: <command>pkg audit -F</command>.</para> + applications for known vulnerabilities. When + <application>pkg</application> is being used the audit + functionality is built in. Execute <command>pkg audit + -F</command> to get a report on vulnerable packages.</para> </warning> <para>The remainder of this chapter explains how to use packages
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