From nobody Sun Jul 17 15:37:30 2022 X-Original-To: doc@mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4Lm8Np6Xpmz4WZxQ for ; Sun, 17 Jul 2022 15:37:30 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: from mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:3]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256 client-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-digest SHA256) (Client CN "mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org", Issuer "R3" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4Lm8Np4gH6z3n1s for ; Sun, 17 Jul 2022 15:37:30 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: from kenobi.freebsd.org (kenobi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::50:1d]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256) (Client did not present a certificate) by mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4Lm8Np3lG8z14pt for ; Sun, 17 Jul 2022 15:37:30 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: from kenobi.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.5]) by kenobi.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id 26HFbUKF051997 for ; Sun, 17 Jul 2022 15:37:30 GMT (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: (from www@localhost) by kenobi.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id 26HFbUxF051996 for doc@FreeBSD.org; Sun, 17 Jul 2022 15:37:30 GMT (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) X-Authentication-Warning: kenobi.freebsd.org: www set sender to bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org using -f From: bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org To: doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: [Bug 265267] portmgr is Ports Management Team, so "the portmgr team" is a strange phrase Date: Sun, 17 Jul 2022 15:37:30 +0000 X-Bugzilla-Reason: AssignedTo X-Bugzilla-Type: changed X-Bugzilla-Watch-Reason: None X-Bugzilla-Product: Documentation X-Bugzilla-Component: Website X-Bugzilla-Version: Latest X-Bugzilla-Keywords: X-Bugzilla-Severity: Affects Some People X-Bugzilla-Who: grahamperrin@gmail.com X-Bugzilla-Status: New X-Bugzilla-Resolution: X-Bugzilla-Priority: --- X-Bugzilla-Assigned-To: doc@FreeBSD.org X-Bugzilla-Flags: X-Bugzilla-Changed-Fields: Message-ID: In-Reply-To: References: Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-Bugzilla-URL: https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/ Auto-Submitted: auto-generated List-Id: Documentation project List-Archive: https://lists.freebsd.org/archives/freebsd-doc List-Help: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@freebsd.org MIME-Version: 1.0 ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=freebsd.org; s=dkim; t=1658072250; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:mime-version:mime-version:content-type:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding: in-reply-to:in-reply-to:references:references; bh=8tLvlSy0015BGphA9KdPcCrw38cuRi8RWz+nzfLk3R8=; b=FSa+inFYAgQQMbFDrYFF65AxhGMmE8BL2N6lPCRjxw5C+yg0Eq9AxjO62kU1JtVG+Ri4cy 76G7UDHkTpJvyAyhCgYDqlmHZ0ux7HsAD/hjA14A0WD7FnGcGDEAGZBK2fEke44RoI5yyO UeMJcrnrM/Wdh8VgycrkKmP4oF6oGMG/oQXCcqCQBAOeNlc3xViq7NrMAALOcqiBrSlOF2 7fM+l1Yd4UBu/rjaBrH25ICcUddcI0rsZlEpxDOFPMHmRui6Bp92GjfEmjMmh33un36jaL blTIKGcMsAnQBGREIDoT6ERzIVA8qWUwDgmonud2dLD+1fA+x+U99QbFyuDXLw== ARC-Seal: i=1; s=dkim; d=freebsd.org; t=1658072250; a=rsa-sha256; cv=none; b=PzlIO91t3J6xTuRYqS7ptEaZ5IgC9nlKOXGpNLOnfCTClZ+cyX8WdswUxXcqMcDSSeysgw lMnkNXzNAIE1JXf++xaIUX3u+Kifn9HC4tEzBLcoFfmugJpXITxvUweGnX6ic8Gg7DnOEB 37ORw+OG2GjZZymf7GesDKMSndQkVYXD3W7yYzvNmDgzkFsOvf4hWVMX2kGOM/V4E8Iziz VauwmMj9g4Zhy2dcLofPhqvRBj9T9Wo9b1KbcwtYdGT06mhAjJt95Gchzw0vV9yDCbHYUB KUnTrKRsklRPuMKvJhQ6vTW4OeRhfdd45dyPQxmPm59RBeK0JbCUPJG/FLiOZg== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; mx1.freebsd.org; none X-ThisMailContainsUnwantedMimeParts: N https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=3D265267 --- Comment #1 from Graham Perrin --- Also, whilst there =E2=80=A6 1) superfluous uppercase:=20 > =E2=80=A6 responsibilities, The Ports Management Team may =E2=80=A6 =E2=80=93 should be lowercase t (the); the Ports Management Team 2) the unordered list of nine items, two of which comprise two sentences, I would: a) make each listing begin lowercase b) where there's a second sentence within a point, make it=20 a separate point with additional indent c) punctuate only the final listing with '.' =E2=80=93 compare with the style of the four-point list under .=20 All subject to approval by portmgr@ and core@ --=20 You are receiving this mail because: You are the assignee for the bug.=