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From: "Bruce A. Mah" <bmah@freebsd.org>
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On Mon, 2004-09-06 at 11:27, Len Zettel wrote:
> OK, you asked :-). Attached are suggested cosmetic changes
> to the English.  If this is premature, my apologies to all for wasting th=
e
> bandwidth.=20

Not a waste at all...thanks for tightening up the writing.  I tend to be
a little verbose sometimes.  I might take a little time to work through
this patch...there were one or two problems that I might solve a little
bit differently, but I want most of your changes.

Thanks!

Bruce.


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