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From: "Michael K. Smith" <mksmith@noanet.net>
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Subject: Re: Pre-commit review requested
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On 9/8/03 11:22 AM, "Tom Rhodes" <trhodes@freebsd.org> wrote:

> Any -doc committer want to review the following patch.  It is by no
> way an in depth cleanup, but it will take us (myself anyway) one
> step further toward my goal of a good security chapter.
> 
> This diff:
> 
> o Adds <application>, <acronym>, and other tags as required.
> o Uses the &os; entity.
> o Cleans up the introduction by pointing out what
> version of Kerberos is in what FreeBSD Release.
> o Modifies <indexterm> and title's to help seperate KerberosIV and Kerberos5.
> 
> I'm only looking for either objections or "please commit"s and would rather
> not bounce this around for the next three days.  Thanks!

Shouldn't:

+    <para>About the various crypt mechanisms available in &os;,
+      such as <acronym>DES</acronym> and MD5.</para>

Be:

+    <para>About the various crypt mechanisms available in &os;,
+      such as <acronym>DES</acronym> and <acronym>MD5</acronym>.</para>

Mike
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