From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG  Thu Aug 26 16:10:40 2010
Return-Path: <owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG>
Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org
Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34])
	by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D37891065672
	for <freebsd-doc@freebsd.org>; Thu, 26 Aug 2010 16:10:40 +0000 (UTC)
	(envelope-from fender0107401@gmail.com)
Received: from mail-pw0-f54.google.com (mail-pw0-f54.google.com
	[209.85.160.54])
	by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A7BA18FC2C
	for <freebsd-doc@freebsd.org>; Thu, 26 Aug 2010 16:10:40 +0000 (UTC)
Received: by pwi8 with SMTP id 8so904586pwi.13
	for <freebsd-doc@freebsd.org>; Thu, 26 Aug 2010 09:10:40 -0700 (PDT)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=gamma;
	h=domainkey-signature:received:received:date:from:to:subject
	:message-id:mime-version:content-type:content-disposition
	:content-transfer-encoding:user-agent;
	bh=kzKXECtUrl/1eXmx5lkHSkM3dG9OJT8dKdSISWCqqiQ=;
	b=CfrNuxFEoPlwVNH7U0Zyo8n3Q66ko9KwZKA8EOPe5WGxZdCvbYmKv03ifS4mqwsI0V
	mrMJ4nUWp5Y9zZmJZeOTW1Pi0pLZdDTco+2v3qxUkSnZ1zaEp91xf2h9YWoFPGEtLpWP
	nGNa0Ej+E2DKKFfTZ55MJCkM1+zcN9hBsPYPI=
DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=gamma;
	h=date:from:to:subject:message-id:mime-version:content-type
	:content-disposition:content-transfer-encoding:user-agent;
	b=xq9zFycGg4HF7rha+Gzq0x1er+728ReTFP4yzCfGdLSRfCVnU68UB8Tu0+4YL4P1eI
	y/65gVaFwkU7iUGAXW4EoUcXBiZipK+7yD1DYHFWT/BPs8n8s6Q/LacQKnXEGj9XAOzU
	dBi868uOA1JWMku3WtM3WfVNCoV8SYiCkDUbU=
Received: by 10.142.211.13 with SMTP id j13mr8463284wfg.308.1282837221697;
	Thu, 26 Aug 2010 08:40:21 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from localhost ([219.243.32.29])
	by mx.google.com with ESMTPS id x31sm2213079wfd.7.2010.08.26.08.40.19
	(version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=RC4-MD5);
	Thu, 26 Aug 2010 08:40:20 -0700 (PDT)
Date: Thu, 26 Aug 2010 23:40:16 +0800
From: Li <fender0107401@gmail.com>
To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org
Message-ID: <20100826154016.GA1720@PC-686.Workstation>
Mime-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8
Content-Disposition: inline
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit
User-Agent: Mutt/1.4.2.3i
Subject: A seggestion about Chapter 29.
X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5
Precedence: list
List-Id: Documentation project <freebsd-doc.freebsd.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/freebsd-doc>,
	<mailto:freebsd-doc-request@freebsd.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://lists.freebsd.org/pipermail/freebsd-doc>
List-Post: <mailto:freebsd-doc@freebsd.org>
List-Help: <mailto:freebsd-doc-request@freebsd.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/freebsd-doc>,
	<mailto:freebsd-doc-request@freebsd.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 26 Aug 2010 16:10:41 -0000

Hi all:

FreeBSD Handbook -> Chapter 29 Network Servers -> 
29.2 The inetd “Super-Server” -> 29.2.3 Command-Line Options:

>Novice users may be pleased to note that these parameters usually
>do not need to be modified, although we mention the rate-limiting
>options below as they be useful should you find that you are 
>receiving an excessive amount of connections. 
>A full list of options can be found in the inetd(8) manual.

I am not a native English speaker, but I think this sentence is too long.

It may cause some confusion.

So, I suggest some modify it.

				fender0107401