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From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org>
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On 2004-09-21 00:40, David O'Brien <obrien@freebsd.org> wrote:
>
> Sounds reasonable.
>
> Index: index.xsl
> ===================================================================
> RCS file: /home/dcvs/www/en/index.xsl,v
> retrieving revision 1.108
> diff -u -r1.108 index.xsl
> --- index.xsl	20 Sep 2004 19:34:41 -0000	1.108
> +++ index.xsl	21 Sep 2004 07:39:37 -0000
> @@ -135,8 +135,8 @@
>  	      <h2><font color="#990000">What is FreeBSD?</font></h2>
>
>  	      <p>FreeBSD is an advanced operating system for
> -		x86 compatible, AMD64 compatible, Alpha, IA-64, PC-98
> -		and UltraSPARC&#174; architectures.
> +		x86 compatible, x86-64 (aka. AMD64) compatible, Alpha/AXP,
> +		IA-64, PC-98 and UltraSPARC&#174; architectures.
>  		It is derived from BSD, the version of <xsl:value-of select="$unix"/>
>  	        developed at
>  		the University of California, Berkeley.

This one seems nice.  It's hard to see the real changes if wrapping is
redone though.  The contraction `aka' is probably something we'd like to
avoid too.  How about this one?

:             <p>FreeBSD is an advanced operating system for
: -             x86 compatible, AMD64 compatible, Alpha, IA-64, PC-98
: +             x86 compatible, x86-64 or AMD64 compatible, Alpha/AXP, IA-64, PC-98
:               and UltraSPARC&#174; architectures.