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From: Rudy Gireyev <rgireyev@yahoo.com>
Subject: Re: Documentation (reviewers wanted)
To: Chris Coleman <chrisc@vmunix.com>, questions@FreeBSD.ORG
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Admittedly I raced through it and this is what jumped out:

Add File Server to a list of capabilities in the introduction.
Explain what .cshrc file is.
What a UNIX shell is.
Which shells are available for FBSD.
How to configure your default shell.
In Networking maybe good to explain how to network Win95s with FBSD.

Sorry the list is so short.
Great job.

Rudy.


---Chris Coleman <chrisc@vmunix.com> wrote:
>
> I am working on some Documentation for FreeBSD. (have been for quite a
> while) and am at a point where I need some constructive advice to
motivate
> me to write the next sections.
> 
> I would like some people to review what I have written so far and
give me
> feedback.
> 
> 	The Stuff is at:
> 			http://www.vmunix.com/fbsd-book
> 
> Thanks
> 
> 	--Chris
> 
> 

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