From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Fri Oct 4 04:22:27 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) (using TLSv1 with cipher ADH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6F6269DE; Fri, 4 Oct 2013 04:22:27 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from eadler@FreeBSD.org) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 41D782338; Fri, 4 Oct 2013 04:22:27 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.7/8.14.7) with ESMTP id r944MRsR059255; Fri, 4 Oct 2013 04:22:27 GMT (envelope-from eadler@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from eadler@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.7/8.14.5/Submit) id r944MRBw059254; Fri, 4 Oct 2013 04:22:27 GMT (envelope-from eadler@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201310040422.r944MRBw059254@svn.freebsd.org> From: Eitan Adler Date: Fri, 4 Oct 2013 04:22:27 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r42819 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 04 Oct 2013 04:22:27 -0000 Author: eadler Date: Fri Oct 4 04:22:26 2013 New Revision: 42819 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42819 Log: Simplify some of the text on the home page. Submitted by: Allan Jude Discussed with: wblock, bjk, jhs Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/index.xsl Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/index.xsl ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/index.xsl Thu Oct 3 22:53:06 2013 (r42818) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/index.xsl Fri Oct 4 04:22:26 2013 (r42819) @@ -35,27 +35,23 @@
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