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Date: Wed, 1 Feb 2006 17:15:02 -0500
From: Bob Johnson <fbsdlists@gmail.com>
To: Stephen Fisher <stephentfisher@yahoo.com>
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Subject: Re: Possible grammatical error
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On 2/1/06, Stephen Fisher <stephentfisher@yahoo.com> wrote:
>
> I noticed a possible grammatical error in this document:
>
> http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/kernelconfig-bu=
ilding.html
>
> Under procedure 2, it says:
>
> "Tip: By default, when you build a custom kernel, all kernel modules
> also will be rebuilded. If you want to update a kernel faster or to
> build only custom modules, you should edit /etc/make.conf before
> starting to build the kernel:"
>
> Shouldn't it say "also will be rebuilt" instead of rebuilded.

Yes, but "...will also be rebuilt." would probably be even better.

- Bob