Date: Wed, 30 Nov 2011 22:20:08 GMT From: Manolis Kiagias <sonic2000gr@gmail.com> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/162961: [PATCH] Update VirtualBox section in handbook Message-ID: <201111302220.pAUMK8Gt078242@freefall.freebsd.org>
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The following reply was made to PR docs/162961; it has been noted by GNATS. From: Manolis Kiagias <sonic2000gr@gmail.com> To: =?ISO-8859-7?Q?Beat_G=E4tzi?= <beat@FreeBSD.org> Cc: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/162961: [PATCH] Update VirtualBox section in handbook Date: Thu, 01 Dec 2011 00:16:14 +0200 On 30/11/2011 9:00 ðì, Beat Gätzi wrote: >> Number: 162961 >> Category: docs >> Synopsis: [PATCH] Update VirtualBox section in handbook >> Confidential: no >> Severity: non-critical >> Priority: low >> Responsible: freebsd-doc >> State: open >> Quarter: >> Keywords: >> Date-Required: >> Class: update >> Submitter-Id: current-users >> Arrival-Date: Wed Nov 30 07:30:11 UTC 2011 >> Closed-Date: >> Last-Modified: >> Originator: Beat Gätzi >> Release: FreeBSD 9.0-CURRENT i386 >> Organization: >> Environment: > System: FreeBSD daedalus.network.local 9.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 9.0-CURRENT #5 r217615M: Thu Jan 20 01:02:35 CET 2011 root@daedalus.network.local:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386 > > > >> Description: > - Attached patch updates the VirtualBox section of the virtualisation > chapter in the handbook. This work was done by Eric Newberry during > the Google Code-In contest so please give him the credit for this > update: > https://google-melange.appspot.com/gci/task/view/google/gci2011/7137268 > > Hi, Nice work! I made some fixes to this and uploaded a revised patch here: http://people.freebsd.org/~manolis/patches/virtualization-virtualbox-chapter-patch-new.txt <http://people.freebsd.org/%7Emanolis/patches/virtualization-virtualbox-chapter-patch-new.txt>; and a build (without images) here: http://people.freebsd.org/~manolis/patches/virtualization-guest.html <http://people.freebsd.org/%7Emanolis/patches/virtualization-guest.html>; Main changes are: - Use passive voice in some places to avoid "you" references - Improve markup in several places (filenames, devices, man pages etc). There maybe also a few other places (i.e. vboxvideo_drv should probably not be tagged using <command>) - Some minor language fixes to match the Handbook style in general This also needs a complete whitespace patch on top, but this can wait until any remaining issues are fixed. Please post followups to this if you have any comments.
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