From owner-svn-doc-projects@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Oct 14 15:58:31 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-projects@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) (using TLSv1 with cipher ADH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 946A5EDA; Mon, 14 Oct 2013 15:58:31 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bcr@FreeBSD.org) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 67F992275; Mon, 14 Oct 2013 15:58:31 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.7/8.14.7) with ESMTP id r9EFwVPj092540; Mon, 14 Oct 2013 15:58:31 GMT (envelope-from bcr@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from bcr@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.7/8.14.5/Submit) id r9EFwVEd092539; Mon, 14 Oct 2013 15:58:31 GMT (envelope-from bcr@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201310141558.r9EFwVEd092539@svn.freebsd.org> From: Benedict Reuschling Date: Mon, 14 Oct 2013 15:58:31 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-projects@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r42952 - projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs X-SVN-Group: doc-projects MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-projects@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for doc projects trees List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 14 Oct 2013 15:58:31 -0000 Author: bcr Date: Mon Oct 14 15:58:30 2013 New Revision: 42952 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42952 Log: Correct some grammar mistakes and typos. Submitted by: Benjamin Kaduk Modified: projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml Modified: projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml Mon Oct 14 13:12:45 2013 (r42951) +++ projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml Mon Oct 14 15:58:30 2013 (r42952) @@ -515,7 +515,7 @@ errors: No known data errors ZFS has a built-in monitoring isystem that can display statistics about I/O happening on the pool in real-time. Additionally, it shows the free and used space on the pool and - how much I/O bandwidth are currently utilized for read and + how much I/O bandwidth is currently utilized for read and write operations. By default, all pools in the system will be monitored and displayed. A pool name can be provided to just monitor one pool. A basic example is provided below: @@ -529,15 +529,15 @@ data 288G 1.53T 2 11 To monitor I/O activity on the pool continuously, a number indicating the seconds after which to refresh the display can be specified. ZFS will then print the next - statistic line after each intervall has been reached. Press + statistic line after each interval has been reached. Press CtrlC to stop this continuous monitoring. Alternatively, a second whole number can be provided on the command line after the - intervall to indicate how many of these statistics should be + interval to indicate how many of these statistics should be displayed in total. - An even more detailed pool I/O statistic can be + Even more detailed pool I/O statistics can be displayed using the -v parameter. For each storage device that is part of the pool ZFS will provide a separate statistic line. This is helpful to