From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Aug 26 16:32:39 2010 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 31227106566B for ; Thu, 26 Aug 2010 16:32:39 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from jhelfman@e-e.com) Received: from mail.experts-exchange.com (mail.experts-exchange.com [72.29.183.251]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 16AC08FC15 for ; Thu, 26 Aug 2010 16:32:38 +0000 (UTC) Received: from eggman.experts-exchange.com (unknown [192.168.103.122]) (using TLSv1 with cipher DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) (Authenticated sender: jhelfman) by mail.experts-exchange.com (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id BF1D8F2F5A6; Thu, 26 Aug 2010 09:32:37 -0700 (PDT) Received: by eggman.experts-exchange.com (sSMTP sendmail emulation); Thu, 26 Aug 2010 09:30:13 -0700 Date: Thu, 26 Aug 2010 09:30:13 -0700 From: Jason To: Li Message-ID: <20100826163013.GJ19553@eggman.experts-exchange.com> References: <20100826154016.GA1720@PC-686.Workstation> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="y0ulUmNC+osPPQO6" Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit In-Reply-To: <20100826154016.GA1720@PC-686.Workstation> X-Operating-System: FreeBSD 7.3-RELEASE-p1 X-Living-The-Dream: I love the SLO Life! User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.20 (2009-06-14) Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: A seggestion about Chapter 29. X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 26 Aug 2010 16:32:39 -0000 --y0ulUmNC+osPPQO6 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8; format=flowed Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit I've attached a patch that should suffice. -j On Thu, Aug 26, 2010 at 11:40:16PM +0800, Li thus spake: >Hi all: > >FreeBSD Handbook -> Chapter 29 Network Servers -> >29.2 The inetd “Super-Server” -> 29.2.3 Command-Line Options: > >>Novice users may be pleased to note that these parameters usually >>do not need to be modified, although we mention the rate-limiting >>options below as they be useful should you find that you are >>receiving an excessive amount of connections. >>A full list of options can be found in the inetd(8) manual. > >I am not a native English speaker, but I think this sentence is too long. > >It may cause some confusion. > >So, I suggest some modify it. > > fender0107401 >_______________________________________________ >freebsd-doc@freebsd.org mailing list >http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/freebsd-doc >To unsubscribe, send any mail to "freebsd-doc-unsubscribe@freebsd.org" > --y0ulUmNC+osPPQO6 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="patch.txt" --- handbook/network-servers/chapter.sgml.orig 2010-08-26 09:16:51.000000000 -0700 +++ handbook/network-servers/chapter.sgml 2010-08-26 09:27:33.000000000 -0700 @@ -196,12 +196,12 @@ single IP address from requesting any service more than 60 times in any given minute. - Novice users may be pleased to note that - these parameters usually do not need to be modified, - although we mention the rate-limiting options below as - they be useful should you find that you are receiving an - excessive amount of connections. A full list of options - can be found in the &man.inetd.8; manual. + Although we mention rate-limiting options below, novice + users may be pleased to note that these parameters usually + do not need to be modified. These options may be useful + should you find that you are receiving an excessive + amount of connections. A full list of options can be found + in the &man.inetd.8; manual. --y0ulUmNC+osPPQO6--