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From: Chern Lee <chern@FreeBSD.org>
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To: Ken Stailey <kstailey@surfbest.net>
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Subject: Re: docs/35011: There are no commands called "diskless" or "jail".
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Does anyone object in making this change?  Ken is trying to state that
section 8 contains more than just commands, eg: diskless(8), yp(8), etc.

The short description of intro(8) should be changed to reflect this.

- chern

Index: intro.8
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/src/share/man/man8/intro.8,v
retrieving revision 1.3.2.3
diff -u -r1.3.2.3 intro.8
--- intro.8     12 Apr 2002 16:25:18 -0000      1.3.2.3
+++ intro.8     29 Jul 2002 11:14:26 -0000
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
 .Os
 .Sh NAME
 .Nm intro
-.Nd "introduction to system maintenance and operation commands"
+.Nd "introduction to system administration commands and procedures"
 .Sh DESCRIPTION
 This section contains information related to system operation
 and maintenance.


On Sat, 16 Feb 2002, Ken Stailey wrote:

>
> >Description:
> IMHO, the intro(8) manpage should be edited to say "command and
> procedures"  not just "commands"  There are no commands called
> "diskless" or "jail". >
> >How-To-Repeat:
> 	N/A
> >Fix:
>
> change intro(8) manpage from
>
>      intro - introduction to system maintenance and operation commands
>
> to
>
>      intro - introduction to system administration commands and procedures
>
>


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