Date: Thu, 14 Mar 2002 16:41:35 -0500 (EST) From: John Baldwin <jhb@FreeBSD.org> To: (Bruce A. Mah) <bmah@freebsd.org> Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org, freebsd-sparc@freebsd.org, Udo Erdelhoff <ue@nathan.ruhr.de> Subject: Re: FreeBSD/sparc64 install document active in -CURRENT Message-ID: <XFMail.20020314164135.jhb@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <200203142134.g2ELY8O23997@bmah.dyndns.org>
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On 14-Mar-2002 Bruce A. Mah wrote:
> If memory serves me right, Udo Erdelhoff wrote:
>
> Good job...I can't believe I left off so many closing tags (admittedly
> I wasn't looking for them). Two minor things...
>
>> @@ -139,12 +139,10 @@
>> on the keyboard, or send a
>> <command>BREAK</command> over the serial console (using for
>> example <command>~#</command> in &man.tip.1; or &man.cu.1;) to
>> - get to the PROM prompt. It looks like
>> + get to the PROM prompt. It looks like this:</para>
>>
>> - <screen>ok </screen>
>> - or
>> - <screen>ok {0} </screen>
>> - (on SMP systems).</para>
>> + <screen><prompt>ok </prompt> (systems with one CPU)
>> +<prompt>ok {0} </prompt> (SMP systems)</screen>
>
> Can we get "(systems with one CPU)" and "(SMP systems)" outside the
> <screen></screen> element? They're explanatory text, not literal stuff
> that shows up on the screen. Not sure if there's an easy way to do
> this.
Use a callout. See the docbook docs on how to do callouts. They are
specifically designed for these types of things.
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