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Date: Mon, 11 Mar 2002 08:09:47 +0000
From: Nik Clayton <nik@freebsd.org>
To: Michael Lucas <mwlucas@blackhelicopters.org>
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Subject: Re: patch for opinions
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On Fri, Mar 08, 2002 at 02:56:29PM -0500, Michael Lucas wrote:
> I was reading the "contributing" article, and my literary
> sensibilities were completely offended.  This section is guilty of
> overuse of exclamation ponits and the word "also", as well as
> miscellaneous inefficiencies in writing.  Attached please find a patch
> for the first section of articles/contributing.  (Not closely checked
> for whitespace gratuitousness, mind you.)

Works for me.  But "diff -u" next time please :-)

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