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From: Jan Beich <jbeich@FreeBSD.org>
To: Greg Lehey <grog@FreeBSD.org>
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Subject: Re: svn commit: r454902 - head/www/firefox-esr
References: <201711260348.vAQ3mFCf002880@repo.freebsd.org>
Date: Sun, 26 Nov 2017 05:18:57 +0100
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Greg Lehey <grog@FreeBSD.org> writes:

> Author: grog
> Date: Sun Nov 26 03:48:15 2017
> New Revision: 454902
> URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/ports/454902
>
> Log:
>   Explain what this really is.
>
> Modified:
>   head/www/firefox-esr/pkg-descr
>
> Modified: head/www/firefox-esr/pkg-descr
> ==============================================================================
> --- head/www/firefox-esr/pkg-descr	Sun Nov 26 02:14:19 2017	(r454901)
> +++ head/www/firefox-esr/pkg-descr	Sun Nov 26 03:48:15 2017	(r454902)
> @@ -1,13 +1,3 @@
> -Mozilla Firefox is a free and open source web browser descended from the
> -Mozilla Application Suite. It is small, fast and easy to use, and offers
> -many advanced features:
> +Firefox ESR is an Extended Support Release of firefox.

This is too short and probably better fit for COMMENT instead if you
deduplicate some words.

> -WWW: http://www.mozilla.com/firefox
> +WWW: https://www.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/organizations/faq/

Better drop en-US/ part in case there's non-English version available.