From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Nov 25 07:55:09 2008 Return-Path: Delivered-To: doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 353DD1065672; Tue, 25 Nov 2008 07:55:09 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from keramida@freebsd.org) Received: from igloo.linux.gr (igloo.linux.gr [62.1.205.36]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E75EF8FC1A; Tue, 25 Nov 2008 07:55:00 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from keramida@freebsd.org) Received: from kobe.laptop (adsl213-219.kln.forthnet.gr [79.103.26.219]) (authenticated bits=128) by igloo.linux.gr (8.14.3/8.14.3/Debian-5) with ESMTP id mAP7skbf010194 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT); Tue, 25 Nov 2008 09:54:51 +0200 Received: from kobe.laptop (kobe.laptop [127.0.0.1]) by kobe.laptop (8.14.3/8.14.3) with ESMTP id mAP7sjnB032029; Tue, 25 Nov 2008 09:54:45 +0200 (EET) (envelope-from keramida@freebsd.org) Received: (from keramida@localhost) by kobe.laptop (8.14.3/8.14.3/Submit) id mAP7sc3L031316; Tue, 25 Nov 2008 09:54:38 +0200 (EET) (envelope-from keramida@freebsd.org) From: Giorgos Keramidas To: Manolis Kiagias References: <20081124153358.7a539e67.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> <492B2D8C.4090807@gmail.com> <20081125.102512.193370295.hrs@allbsd.org> <492B7E8E.4070508@gmail.com> Date: Tue, 25 Nov 2008 09:54:37 +0200 In-Reply-To: <492B7E8E.4070508@gmail.com> (Manolis Kiagias's message of "Tue, 25 Nov 2008 06:26:54 +0200") Message-ID: <873ahggs02.fsf@kobe.laptop> User-Agent: Gnus/5.13 (Gnus v5.13) Emacs/23.0.60 (berkeley-unix) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii X-MailScanner-ID: mAP7skbf010194 X-Hellug-MailScanner: Found to be clean X-Hellug-MailScanner-SpamCheck: not spam, SpamAssassin (not cached, score=-4.12, required 5, autolearn=not spam, ALL_TRUSTED -1.80, AWL 0.28, BAYES_00 -2.60) X-Hellug-MailScanner-From: keramida@freebsd.org X-Spam-Status: No Cc: trhodes@freebsd.org, doc@freebsd.org, pgj@freebsd.org, gabor@kovesdan.org, remko@freebsd.org Subject: Re: A patch for the 'geom' chapter X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 25 Nov 2008 07:55:09 -0000 On Tue, 25 Nov 2008 06:26:54 +0200, Manolis Kiagias wrote: > Hiroki Sato wrote: >> Manolis Kiagias wrote >> in <492B2D8C.4090807@gmail.com>: >> >> so> After our discussion, here again is the "second take" of this patch: >> so> >> so> http://people.freebsd.org/~manolis/geom.txt >> >> One thing: >> >> + Permanent labels can be created with the tunefs >> + or newfs commands. They will then be created >> >> I think the &man.tunefs.8; and &man.newfs.8; are better than >> foo here. > > True, will change these. I just finished reading the new patch. Excellent work :) Just a minor point that may make the gjournal parts friendlier to mirror admins. You don't have to hardcode `www.freebsd.org' or the path to the gjournal article into the Handbook. This part: + Please refer to the article Implementing UFS Journaling on a Desktop PC + for detailed instructions on this task. Can be written as: + Please refer to the article Implementing UFS Journaling on + a Desktop PC for detailed instructions on this task. I have updated `doc/share/sgml/urls.ent' to include URL entities for our current set of articles, including gjournal-desktop, so if you update from CVS the patch should build fine either way. Patch approved by me too.