From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Sat Jul 13 21:37:21 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [8.8.178.115]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A9531542; Sat, 13 Jul 2013 21:37:21 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@mit.edu) Received: from dmz-mailsec-scanner-6.mit.edu (dmz-mailsec-scanner-6.mit.edu [18.7.68.35]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 18E9E10BD; Sat, 13 Jul 2013 21:37:20 +0000 (UTC) X-AuditID: 12074423-b7f168e00000095a-e2-51e1c88a8b0b Received: from mailhub-auth-3.mit.edu ( [18.9.21.43]) by dmz-mailsec-scanner-6.mit.edu (Symantec Messaging Gateway) with SMTP id AA.AE.02394.A88C1E15; Sat, 13 Jul 2013 17:37:14 -0400 (EDT) Received: from outgoing.mit.edu (outgoing-auth-1.mit.edu [18.9.28.11]) by mailhub-auth-3.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.9.2) with ESMTP id r6DLbDKB028337; Sat, 13 Jul 2013 17:37:13 -0400 Received: from multics.mit.edu (system-low-sipb.mit.edu [18.187.2.37]) (authenticated bits=56) (User authenticated as kaduk@ATHENA.MIT.EDU) by outgoing.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.12.4) with ESMTP id r6DLbBtX029841 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT); Sat, 13 Jul 2013 17:37:12 -0400 Received: (from kaduk@localhost) by multics.mit.edu (8.12.9.20060308) id r6DLbASW008317; Sat, 13 Jul 2013 17:37:10 -0400 (EDT) Date: Sat, 13 Jul 2013 17:37:10 -0400 (EDT) From: Benjamin Kaduk To: Warren Block Subject: Re: svn commit: r42266 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security In-Reply-To: <201307130333.r6D3XLuD063885@svn.freebsd.org> Message-ID: References: <201307130333.r6D3XLuD063885@svn.freebsd.org> User-Agent: Alpine 1.10 (GSO 962 2008-03-14) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; format=flowed; charset=US-ASCII X-Brightmail-Tracker: H4sIAAAAAAAAA+NgFvrDIsWRmVeSWpSXmKPExsUixCmqrdt14mGgQf9HOYsfHw8xWdxYtJ/J Ynd/L7PF5fcTWRxYPGZ8ms8SwBjFZZOSmpNZllqkb5fAlfFu5Xumgq/cFdu+n2dvYLzP2cXI ySEhYCKxbfdbJghbTOLCvfVsXYxcHEIC+xglri/pY4JwNjJK/J7QyQ7hHGKSOHp1HpDDAeQ0 MEqctQLpZhHQllh4/zTYJDYBFYmZbzaygdgiAqoS37tXgcWZBaIk9ixtZAVpFRYIkPg+JRwk zClgJbFm5zRGEJtXwFHi0o5PYK1CApYSZ7e2g8VFBXQkVu+fwgJRIyhxcuYTFoiRlhL/1v5i ncAoOAtJahaS1AJGplWMsim5Vbq5iZk5xanJusXJiXl5qUW6Znq5mSV6qSmlmxhBAcvuoryD 8c9BpUOMAhyMSjy8moceBgqxJpYVV+YeYpTkYFIS5c3dCRTiS8pPqcxILM6ILyrNSS0+xCjB wawkwpv990GgEG9KYmVValE+TEqag0VJnPfZ07OBQgLpiSWp2ampBalFMFkZDg4lCd6w40BD BYtS01Mr0jJzShDSTBycIMN5gIYHgNTwFhck5hZnpkPkTzHqckw+u+U9oxBLXn5eqpQ4rwVI kQBIUUZpHtwcWKJ5xSgO9JYwbzRIFQ8wScFNegW0hAloye1V90GWlCQipKQaGE3PCj55GWL0 b1fyGvaauG+yvqWruy+8/mfCzlp+XvFDzaVajVL7zuX1C5tU7C9z9uYadLxl2tjzZr7Wh1s+ 50XKjsnxFvf8DX6dMG3PTb3Ir0n8RslpHpd2cX1KcvH7vfTn15/3XoolbVeuWcaezHp010/X AxotPvlpLdOFHt7tnr+AQ6XisxJLcUaioRZzUXEiAMk9Wu4PAwAA Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 13 Jul 2013 21:37:21 -0000 On Sat, 13 Jul 2013, Warren Block wrote: > Author: wblock > Date: Sat Jul 13 03:33:20 2013 > New Revision: 42266 > URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42266 > > Log: > Fix a wording bug: action to resource. Also fix some title > capitalization and redundancy issues. > > Submitted by: MNIHKLOM (forum user, action/resource issue) > > Modified: > head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml > > Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml > ============================================================================== > --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml Sat Jul 13 01:50:56 2013 (r42265) > +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml Sat Jul 13 03:33:20 2013 (r42266) > @@ -3744,7 +3744,7 @@ VII. References Potentially a single, more constrained user would require > an additional label added, the resource database needs to be > built using cap_mkdb, edits made to > - the /etc/master.passwd file. In > + /etc/master.passwd. In This sentence seems rather confused. My best guess is that there used to be a list of three things, and the last one was removed sloppily. -Ben > addition, the password database must be rebuilt using > pwd_mkdb. This multi-step process could be > very time consuming depending on how many users must be