From owner-svn-src-all@FreeBSD.ORG Wed May 16 01:39:36 2012 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-src-all@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D3559106564A; Wed, 16 May 2012 01:39:36 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from hrs@FreeBSD.org) Received: from mail.allbsd.org (gatekeeper-int.allbsd.org [IPv6:2001:2f0:104:e002::2]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id C33698FC08; Wed, 16 May 2012 01:39:35 +0000 (UTC) Received: from alph.allbsd.org (p4242-ipbf1504funabasi.chiba.ocn.ne.jp [118.7.211.242]) (authenticated bits=128) by mail.allbsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4) with ESMTP id q4G1dC4T083655; Wed, 16 May 2012 10:39:22 +0900 (JST) (envelope-from hrs@FreeBSD.org) Received: from localhost (localhost [IPv6:::1]) (authenticated bits=0) by alph.allbsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4) with ESMTP id q4G1dBkY026618; Wed, 16 May 2012 10:39:12 +0900 (JST) (envelope-from hrs@FreeBSD.org) Date: Wed, 16 May 2012 10:38:42 +0900 (JST) Message-Id: <20120516.103842.730056917692339809.hrs@allbsd.org> To: gjb@FreeBSD.org From: Hiroki Sato In-Reply-To: <201205121508.q4CF8MLI039258@svn.freebsd.org> References: <201205121508.q4CF8MLI039258@svn.freebsd.org> X-PGPkey-fingerprint: BDB3 443F A5DD B3D0 A530 FFD7 4F2C D3D8 2793 CF2D X-Mailer: Mew version 6.4.50 on Emacs 23.4 / Mule 6.0 (HANACHIRUSATO) Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: Multipart/Signed; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; micalg=pgp-sha1; boundary="--Security_Multipart(Wed_May_16_10_38_42_2012_091)--" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Virus-Scanned: clamav-milter 0.97.3 at gatekeeper.allbsd.org X-Virus-Status: Clean X-Greylist: Sender succeeded SMTP AUTH, not delayed by milter-greylist-4.2.3 (mail.allbsd.org [133.31.130.32]); Wed, 16 May 2012 10:39:28 +0900 (JST) X-Spam-Status: No, score=-104.1 required=13.0 tests=BAYES_00, CONTENT_TYPE_PRESENT,RCVD_IN_RP_RNBL,SPF_SOFTFAIL,USER_IN_WHITELIST autolearn=no version=3.3.1 X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.3.1 (2010-03-16) on gatekeeper.allbsd.org Cc: svn-src-head@FreeBSD.org, svn-src-all@FreeBSD.org, src-committers@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r235337 - in head: lib/libutil sbin/hastd sbin/iscontrol share/man/man5 share/termcap usr.sbin/jail usr.sbin/ntp/doc usr.sbin/wpa/hostapd usr.sbin/wpa/wpa_supplicant X-BeenThere: svn-src-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire src tree \(except for " user" and " projects" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 16 May 2012 01:39:36 -0000 ----Security_Multipart(Wed_May_16_10_38_42_2012_091)-- Content-Type: Text/Plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Glen Barber wrote in <201205121508.q4CF8MLI039258@svn.freebsd.org>: gj> Author: gjb (doc committer) gj> Date: Sat May 12 15:08:22 2012 gj> New Revision: 235337 gj> URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/235337 gj> gj> Log: gj> General mdoc(7) and typo fixes. gj> gj> PR: 167804 gj> Submitted by: Nobuyuki Koganemaru (kogane!jp.freebsd.org) gj> MFC after: 3 days gj> gj> Modified: gj> head/lib/libutil/login.conf.5 gj> head/sbin/hastd/hast.conf.5 gj> head/sbin/iscontrol/iscsi.conf.5 gj> head/share/man/man5/device.hints.5 gj> head/share/man/man5/make.conf.5 gj> head/share/man/man5/nsmb.conf.5 gj> head/share/man/man5/portsnap.conf.5 gj> head/share/man/man5/rc.conf.5 gj> head/share/termcap/termcap.5 gj> head/usr.sbin/jail/jail.conf.5 gj> head/usr.sbin/ntp/doc/ntp.conf.5 gj> head/usr.sbin/wpa/hostapd/hostapd.conf.5 gj> head/usr.sbin/wpa/wpa_supplicant/wpa_supplicant.conf.5 gj> (snip) gj> Optionally, WPA PSKs can be read from a separate text file (containing a gj> -list of (PSK,MAC address) pairs. gj> +list of PSK,MAC address pairs). I think "containing list of (PSK, MAC address) pairs." or "containing a list of PSK and MAC address pairs." is better for this part. -- Hiroki ----Security_Multipart(Wed_May_16_10_38_42_2012_091)-- Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.11 (FreeBSD) iEYEABECAAYFAk+zBSIACgkQTyzT2CeTzy2H7ACeK1cT4BPj1+g9lvKOFhr7PAa7 gG0An2NF9j7Wg8L9PsQ7gpzRF2mflAIO =BZrz -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- ----Security_Multipart(Wed_May_16_10_38_42_2012_091)----