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Sat, 13 Apr 2019 00:54:56 GMT (envelope-from gjb@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <201904130054.x3D0su1n020468@repo.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: repo.freebsd.org: gjb set sender to gjb@FreeBSD.org using -f From: Glen Barber To: src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-stable@freebsd.org, svn-src-stable-11@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r346171 - stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes X-SVN-Group: stable-11 X-SVN-Commit-Author: gjb X-SVN-Commit-Paths: stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes X-SVN-Commit-Revision: 346171 X-SVN-Commit-Repository: base MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Precedence: bulk X-Loop: FreeBSD.org Sender: owner-src-committers@freebsd.org X-Rspamd-Queue-Id: 64DCE945C1 X-Spamd-Bar: -- Authentication-Results: mx1.freebsd.org X-Spamd-Result: default: False [-2.94 / 15.00]; local_wl_from(0.00)[freebsd.org]; NEURAL_HAM_MEDIUM(-1.00)[-0.999,0]; NEURAL_HAM_SHORT(-0.94)[-0.942,0]; ASN(0.00)[asn:11403, ipnet:96.47.64.0/20, country:US]; NEURAL_HAM_LONG(-1.00)[-1.000,0] Status: O X-BeenThere: svn-src-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire src tree \(except for " user" and " projects" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Date: Tue, 03 Sep 2019 14:07:35 -0000 X-Original-Date: Sat, 13 Apr 2019 00:54:56 +0000 (UTC) X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 03 Sep 2019 14:07:35 -0000 Author: gjb Date: Sat Apr 13 00:54:56 2019 New Revision: 346171 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/346171 Log: Fix some grammar nits. Submitted by: adamw Sponsored by: The FreeBSD Foundation Modified: stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml Modified: stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml ============================================================================== --- stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml Fri Apr 12 23:22:27 2019 (r346170) +++ stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml Sat Apr 13 00:54:56 2019 (r346171) @@ -212,7 +212,7 @@ names. The &man.pfctl.8; utility has been - updated to provide more clear output and reference the + updated to provide clearer output and reference the net.pf.request_maxcount &man.sysctl.8; if a defined table is too large. @@ -221,9 +221,8 @@ names. The &man.sh.1; utility has been updated - to add the pipefail option which allows - checking the exit status of all commands in a pipeline more - easily. + to add the pipefail option which simplifies + checking the exit status of all commands in a pipeline. The &man.patch.1; utility has been updated to exit successfully if the input patch file is