From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Sep 15 13:30:30 2003 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 02E9F16A521 for ; Mon, 15 Sep 2003 13:30:30 -0700 (PDT) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [216.136.204.21]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2EE9F43FE9 for ; Mon, 15 Sep 2003 13:30:27 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.12.9/8.12.9) with ESMTP id h8FKURUp098111 for ; Mon, 15 Sep 2003 13:30:27 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.12.9/8.12.9/Submit) id h8FKURSd098110; Mon, 15 Sep 2003 13:30:27 -0700 (PDT) Resent-Date: Mon, 15 Sep 2003 13:30:27 -0700 (PDT) Resent-Message-Id: <200309152030.h8FKURSd098110@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, Josef El-Rayes Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 41CE316A4C0 for ; Mon, 15 Sep 2003 13:29:59 -0700 (PDT) Received: from octopussy.utanet.at (octopussy.utanet.at [213.90.36.45]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 811D243FB1 for ; Mon, 15 Sep 2003 13:29:58 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from shammer@daemon.li) Received: from pam.utanet.at ([213.90.36.6]) by octopussy.utanet.at with esmtp (Exim 4.12) id 19yzyu-0006Oc-00 for FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org; Mon, 15 Sep 2003 22:29:56 +0200 Received: from dsl-242-127.utaonline.at ([212.152.242.127] helo=gina.at) by pam.utanet.at with esmtp (Exim 4.12) id 19yzyu-0000uY-00 for FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org; Mon, 15 Sep 2003 22:29:56 +0200 Received: by gina.at (Postfix, from userid 1001) id 31AED60F2; Mon, 15 Sep 2003 22:29:51 +0200 (CEST) Message-Id: <20030915202951.31AED60F2@gina.at> Date: Mon, 15 Sep 2003 22:29:51 +0200 (CEST) From: Josef El-Rayes To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 Subject: docs/56901: [patch] articles/diskless-x: fix bad english X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list Reply-To: Josef El-Rayes List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 15 Sep 2003 20:30:30 -0000 >Number: 56901 >Category: docs >Synopsis: [patch] articles/diskless-x: fix bad english >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: update >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Mon Sep 15 13:30:26 PDT 2003 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Josef El-Rayes >Release: FreeBSD 5.1-CURRENT i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD gina.at 5.1-CURRENT FreeBSD 5.1-CURRENT #1: Sat Sep 13 13:22:16 CEST 2003 root@gina.at:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GINA i386 >Description: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/diskless-x/article.sgml: >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: the expression "foobar'd" definitely does not belong into a serious text. --- article.sgml.diff begins here --- --- article.sgml.orig Mon Sep 15 18:15:01 2003 +++ article.sgml Mon Sep 15 18:53:58 2003 @@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ Compile the net-boot programs that are located in /usr/src/sys/i386/boot/netboot. You should read the comments at the top of the Makefile. Adjust as - required. Make a backup of the original in case it gets foobar'd. When + required. Make a backup of the original in case something goes wrong. When the build is done, there should be 2 &ms-dos; executables, nb8390.com and nb3c509.com. One of these two programs will be what you need to run on the diskless --- article.sgml.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: