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http://perforce.freebsd.org/chv.cgi?CH=20123

Change 20123 by bmah@bmah_intruder on 2002/10/25 08:25:04

	Try to get users to read the release docs.  Change a section
	title.  Spelling fixes from ispell.

Affected files ...

.. //depot/releng/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/early-adopter-50/article.sgml#5 edit

Differences ...

==== //depot/releng/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/early-adopter-50/article.sgml#5 (text+ko) ====

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
       <corpauthor>The FreeBSD Release Engineering Team</corpauthor>
     </authorgroup>
 
-    <pubdate>$P4: //depot/releng/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/early-adopter-50/article.sgml#4 $</pubdate>
+    <pubdate>$P4: //depot/releng/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/early-adopter-50/article.sgml#5 $</pubdate>
 
     <copyright>
       <year>2002</year>
@@ -293,7 +293,10 @@
     <para>For those users with existing FreeBSD systems, this section
       offers a few notes on upgrading a FreeBSD
       4.<replaceable>X</replaceable> system to
-      5.<replaceable>X</replaceable>.</para>
+      5.<replaceable>X</replaceable>.  As with any FreeBSD upgrade, it
+      is crucial to read the release notes and the errata for the
+      version in question, as well as
+      <filename>src/UPGRADING</filename> for source upgrades.</para>
 
     <section>
       <title>Binary Upgrades</title>
@@ -337,7 +340,7 @@
       <title>Source Upgrades</title>
 
       <para>Reading <filename>src/UPDATING</filename> is absolutely
-        essential.  The section entitied <quote>To upgrade from
+        essential.  The section entitled <quote>To upgrade from
         4.x-stable to current</quote> contains a step-by-step update
         procedure.  This procedure must be followed exactly, without
         using of the <quote>shortcuts</quote> that some users
@@ -346,7 +349,7 @@
     </section>
 
     <section>
-      <title>Common Caveats</title>
+      <title>Common Notes</title>
 
       <para><application>Perl</application> has been removed from the
         base system.  The recommended way of installing Perl is either

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