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From: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org>
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Subject: Re: cvs commit:
 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking chapter.sgml
 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics chapter.sgml
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On Sun, 23 Nov 2003 17:58:04 +0000
Ceri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org> wrote:


> >   Also expand some contractions of the same, discovered while I was
> >   hunting down all of the above.
> 
> Also note that the handbook (especially the security chapter) is rife
> with contractions, which I believe we are against.  Personally, I am not
> against them enough to concern myself with that right now.
> 
> Ceri

I've been working on a security chapter patch for some time now.
While it is still a work in progress, a seperate commit to clean
this up would hold merit.

-- 
Tom Rhodes