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Subject: svn commit: r39649 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports
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Author: wblock
Date: Wed Oct  3 12:18:42 2012
New Revision: 39649
URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/39649

Log:
  Wording fixes to ports chapter update.
  
  Submitted by:	Ryusuke SUZUKI <ryusuke@FreeBSD.org>

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml	Wed Oct  3 11:09:34 2012	(r39648)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml	Wed Oct  3 12:18:42 2012	(r39649)
@@ -617,7 +617,7 @@ docbook                     =
       targets and environment variables is available in &man.ports.7;.</para>
 
     <warning>
-      <para>As of late 2012, the FreeBSD Ports Project is in the
+      <para>As of late 2012, the &os; Ports Project is in the
 	process of migrating revision control systems from CVS to
 	Subversion.  As a result, these instructions are in a state of
 	change.  The preferred mechanism for general ports use is
@@ -635,7 +635,7 @@ docbook                     =
       <para>The Ports Collection is a set of
 	<filename>Makefiles</filename>, patches, and description files
 	stored in <filename>/usr/ports</filename>.  This set of files
-	is used for building and installing applications &os;.  The
+	is used for building and installing applications on &os;.  The
 	instructions below show several methods of obtaining the Ports
 	Collection if it was not installed during initial &os;
 	setup.</para>
@@ -739,9 +739,9 @@ docbook                     =
 
 	<warning>
 	  <para>The CVSup method of retrieving and synchronizing the
-	    ports collection is being deprecated as part of a
+	    Ports Collection is being deprecated as part of a
 	    migration to Subversion.  While it remains supported, the
-	    service will be discontinued as of 28 February
+	    service will be discontinued as of February 28,
 	    2013.</para>
 	</warning>