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Date:      Fri, 13 Mar 2015 06:28:34 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Brad Davis <brd@FreeBSD.org>
To:        doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r46340 - in head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles: freebsd-questions ldap-auth linux-emulation pr-guidelines
Message-ID:  <201503130628.t2D6SYUR088131@svn.freebsd.org>

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Author: brd
Date: Fri Mar 13 06:28:33 2015
New Revision: 46340
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/46340

Log:
  Additional language gender sweep..

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-questions/article.xml
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/ldap-auth/article.xml
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/linux-emulation/article.xml
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/pr-guidelines/article.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-questions/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-questions/article.xml	Fri Mar 13 03:48:06 2015	(r46339)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-questions/article.xml	Fri Mar 13 06:28:33 2015	(r46340)
@@ -507,15 +507,15 @@ fine, but when I try to reboot the syste
 	<para>Do you have something to contribute beyond what has already been
 	  said?  In general, <quote>Yeah, me too</quote> answers do not help
 	  much, although there are exceptions, like when somebody is
-	  describing a problem he is having, and he does not know whether it is
-	  his fault or whether there is something wrong with the hardware or
+	  describing a problem they are having, and they do not know whether it is
+	  their fault or whether there is something wrong with the hardware or
 	  software.  If you do send a <quote>me too</quote> answer, you should
 	  also include any further relevant information.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
 	<para>Are you sure you understand the question?  Very frequently, the
-	  person who asks the question is confused or does not express himself
+	  person who asks the question is confused or does not express themselves
 	  very well.  Even with the best understanding of the system, it is
 	  easy to send a reply which does not answer the question.  This
 	  does not help: you will leave the person who submitted the question

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/ldap-auth/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/ldap-auth/article.xml	Fri Mar 13 03:48:06 2015	(r46339)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/ldap-auth/article.xml	Fri Mar 13 06:28:33 2015	(r46340)
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
     <para>This article is not intended to be an exhaustive account of
       the security, robustness, or best practice considerations for
       configuring LDAP or the other services discussed herein.  While
-      the author takes care to do everything correctly, he does not
+      the author takes care to do everything correctly, they do not
       address security issues beyond a general scope.  This article
       should be considered to lay the theoretical groundwork only, and
       any actual implementation should be accompanied by careful

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/linux-emulation/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/linux-emulation/article.xml	Fri Mar 13 03:48:06 2015	(r46339)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/linux-emulation/article.xml	Fri Mar 13 06:28:33 2015	(r46340)
@@ -657,7 +657,7 @@
       <para>Emulation is usually used in a place, where using the original
 	component is not feasible nor possible at all.  For example someone
 	might want to use a program developed for a different operating
-	system than he uses.  Then emulation comes in handy.  Sometimes
+	system than they use.  Then emulation comes in handy.  Sometimes
 	there is no other way but to use emulation - e.g. when the hardware
 	device you try to use does not exist (yet/anymore) then there is no
 	other way but emulation.  This happens often when porting an operating

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/pr-guidelines/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/pr-guidelines/article.xml	Fri Mar 13 03:48:06 2015	(r46339)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/pr-guidelines/article.xml	Fri Mar 13 06:28:33 2015	(r46340)
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@
 	  <literal>-STABLE</literal> if the problem does not exist in
 	  <literal>-CURRENT</literal>), making sure to reference the
 	  Problem Report in his commit log (and credit the originator
-	  if he submitted all or part of the patch) and, if
+	  if they submitted all or part of the patch) and, if
 	  appropriate, start an MFC countdown.  The bug is set to the
 	  <literal>Needs MFC</literal> state.</para>
       </listitem>



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