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From: Jay <jayed@jayed.com>
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Subject: PR docs/32578  (A petty change to index.xsl)
Date: Sun, 26 May 2002 16:12:12 -0500
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I have a proposed solution for this PR: =20
http://www.FreeBSD.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=3Ddocs/32578=20

Instead of saying "Run a huge variety of applications", how about "A huge=
=20
number of applications"? =20

With five different people in the PR audit trail -- and knowing the froth=
ing=20
grammatical madness that underlies the genteel tone of the freebsd-doc li=
st=20
:) -- I assume that I missed an exciting discussion about this particular=
 PR. =20
(And, at the moment, I'm too lazy to search the archives so I could be=20
wrong).

Hopefully this will work for everyone.

Jay Edwards

--- index.xsl   Sun May 26 15:49:59 2002
+++ index.xsl   Sun May 26 15:51:29 2002
@@ -255,7 +255,7 @@
                <a href=3D"gallery/gallery.html">gallery</a> for examples=
 of
                FreeBSD powered applications and services.</p>

-             <h2><font color=3D"#990000">Run a huge variety of
+             <h2><font color=3D"#990000">A huge number of
                  applications</font></h2>

              <p>The quality of FreeBSD combined with today's low-cost,




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