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From: "Dinesh Punjabi" <dinesh@punjabi.org>
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Subject: 19.4.10. confusing, needs to be rewritten
Date: Wed, 23 May 2001 08:56:11 -0600
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I am grateful for this documentation.

But, the handbook section 19.4.10. (Update files not updated
by make world) is very confusing especially
for people like me who read a line and follow it faithfully.

Why is the process of creating /var/tmp/root being done
twice, first without a timestamp and then with a timestamp.

Why not just have everyone create a
/var/tmp/root-<timestamp> period!

Your poor verbiage in this section will surely confuse a lot
of people!

Nice job overall!

Best Wishes,

Dinesh





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