From owner-freebsd-doc Wed Mar 25 08:03:06 1998 Return-Path: Received: (from majordom@localhost) by hub.freebsd.org (8.8.8/8.8.8) id IAA29415 for freebsd-doc-outgoing; Wed, 25 Mar 1998 08:03:06 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG) Received: from pluto.plutotech.com (mail.plutotech.com [206.168.67.137]) by hub.freebsd.org (8.8.8/8.8.8) with ESMTP id IAA29409; Wed, 25 Mar 1998 08:03:02 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from kelly@plutotech.com) Received: from plutotech.com (tampopo.plutotech.com [206.168.67.161]) by pluto.plutotech.com (8.8.7/8.8.5) with ESMTP id JAA14533; Wed, 25 Mar 1998 09:02:57 -0700 (MST) Message-ID: <35192AB1.43F399D@plutotech.com> Date: Wed, 25 Mar 1998 09:02:57 -0700 From: Sean Kelly Organization: Pluto Technologies X-Mailer: Mozilla 4.04 [en] (X11; I; FreeBSD 3.0-CURRENT i386) MIME-Version: 1.0 To: nik@iii.co.uk CC: doc@FreeBSD.ORG, jfieber@FreeBSD.ORG, mbarkah@FreeBSD.ORG, paul@FreeBSD.ORG, dave@FreeBSD.ORG Subject: Re: [REVIEW] Changes to the DocProj web pages References: <19980325110053.21549@iii.co.uk> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk X-Loop: FreeBSD.org Nik: These new pages feel professional yet inviting. I like them. The only nits I have to pick are comprised of punctuation errors and typos: On the `docproj' page, the second paragraph uses "it's" when it should be "its". (The paragraph after that one gets it right.) On the `current' page, the third paragraph should read "whose" instead of "who's". On the `sgml' page, why is the emphasis for `not' in the fourth paragpraph rendered as ``*not*'' instead of using italics or bold? On the `submitting' page, change "how" in the third paragraph (``You should probably...'') to "who". Thanks for taking this on. --Sean To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message