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Author: trhodes
Date: Tue Apr  7 13:51:41 2009
New Revision: 190799
URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/190799

Log:
  Remove contractions, reword a sentence to avoid a double negative,
  and bump document date for previous change.
  
  OKed by:	piso

Modified:
  head/sbin/ipfw/ipfw.8

Modified: head/sbin/ipfw/ipfw.8
==============================================================================
--- head/sbin/ipfw/ipfw.8	Tue Apr  7 13:42:53 2009	(r190798)
+++ head/sbin/ipfw/ipfw.8	Tue Apr  7 13:51:41 2009	(r190799)
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 .\"
 .\" $FreeBSD$
 .\"
-.Dd February 7, 2009
+.Dd April 5, 2009
 .Dt IPFW 8
 .Os
 .Sh NAME
@@ -881,9 +881,10 @@ and
 which limit, respectively, the maximum number of processable fragments (default: 800) and
 the maximum number of fragments per packet (default: 16).
 .Pp
-NOTA BENE: since fragments don't contain port numbers, beware not to use them whe issuing a
+NOTA BENE: since fragments do not contain port numbers, they should be avoided with the
 .Nm reass
-rule. Alternatively, direction-based (like 
+rule.
+Alternatively, direction-based (like 
 .Nm in
 /
 .Nm out