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  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  - Grammar fixes;
  - Many rewordings and punctuation changes to improve the content of
    this chapter;
  - s/Berkeley Internet Name Daemon/Berkeley Internet Name Domain
  - s/colon separated/colon-separated
  
  PR:             docs/114265
  Submitted by:   Ben Kaduk <minimarmot@gmail.com>
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.148     +32 -28    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.sgml