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Subject: svn commit: r48790 - head/de_DE.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks
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Author: bhd
Date: Sun May  8 15:22:18 2016
New Revision: 48790
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/48790

Log:
  Update to r46047:
  
  Remove redundant markup and words in a sentence.

Modified:
  head/de_DE.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml

Modified: head/de_DE.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/de_DE.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml	Sun May  8 14:17:15 2016	(r48789)
+++ head/de_DE.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml	Sun May  8 15:22:18 2016	(r48790)
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 
      $FreeBSD$
      $FreeBSDde: de-docproj/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml,v 1.187 2012/04/26 19:32:48 bcr Exp $
-     basiert auf: r45416
+     basiert auf: r46047
 -->
 <chapter xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" version="5.0" xml:id="disks">
   <info><title>Speichermedien</title>
@@ -1670,8 +1670,8 @@ scsibus1:
       <para>Verwenden Sie stattdessen <command>dump</command> und
 	<command>restore</command> in einer sichereren Weise über eine
 	<acronym>SSH</acronym>-Verbindung.  In diesem Beispiel wird
-	eine vollständige, komprimierte Sicherung des
-	<filename>/usr</filename> Dateisystems erstellt, das
+	eine vollständige, komprimierte Sicherung von
+	<filename>/usr</filename> erstellt, das
 	anschließend an einen bestimmten Host über eine
 	<acronym>SSH</acronym>-Verbindung gesendet wird.</para>