From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Aug 29 16:50:06 2011 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D7DBE106564A for ; Mon, 29 Aug 2011 16:50:06 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::28]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id AD4EC8FC18 for ; Mon, 29 Aug 2011 16:50:06 +0000 (UTC) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4) with ESMTP id p7TGo6Uf007973 for ; Mon, 29 Aug 2011 16:50:06 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4/Submit) id p7TGo6PX007972; Mon, 29 Aug 2011 16:50:06 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Mon, 29 Aug 2011 16:50:06 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <201108291650.p7TGo6PX007972@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, Isabell Long Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 61F47106564A for ; Mon, 29 Aug 2011 16:46:42 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from nobody@FreeBSD.org) Received: from red.freebsd.org (red.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::22]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 378D28FC1D for ; Mon, 29 Aug 2011 16:46:42 +0000 (UTC) Received: from red.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by red.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4) with ESMTP id p7TGkfAV084026 for ; Mon, 29 Aug 2011 16:46:41 GMT (envelope-from nobody@red.freebsd.org) Received: (from nobody@localhost) by red.freebsd.org (8.14.4/8.14.4/Submit) id p7TGkf7q084025; Mon, 29 Aug 2011 16:46:41 GMT (envelope-from nobody) Message-Id: <201108291646.p7TGkf7q084025@red.freebsd.org> Date: Mon, 29 Aug 2011 16:46:41 GMT From: Isabell Long To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: www-3.1 Cc: Subject: docs/160284: [patch] Inconsistent spacing between colons in French translation of Dtrace Handbook chapter. X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 29 Aug 2011 16:50:07 -0000 >Number: 160284 >Category: docs >Synopsis: [patch] Inconsistent spacing between colons in French translation of Dtrace Handbook chapter. >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Mon Aug 29 16:50:06 UTC 2011 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Isabell Long >Release: >Organization: >Environment: >Description: I was just reading through the recently committed French translation of the Dtrace Handbook chapter and noticed a few punctuation inconsistencies that I hadn't picked up on when I proofread my translation. Sometimes, there is no space before a colon, but at other times there is. For other French translations, convention seems to be no space before a colon. The attached patch fixes these inconsistencies for this document. >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: See attached patch. Patch attached with submission follows: Index: chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/isabell/freebsd/doc-cvs/doc/fr_FR.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/dtrace/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.1 diff -u -r1.1 chapter.sgml --- chapter.sgml 13 Jun 2011 16:22:06 -0000 1.1 +++ chapter.sgml 29 Aug 2011 16:41:46 -0000 @@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ Les utilisateurs de l'architecture AMD64 devraient ajouter la ligne suivante à leur fichier de configuration de - noyau : + noyau: options KDTRACE_FRAME @@ -251,7 +251,7 @@ Le système devrait maintenant supporter &dtrace;. Pour afficher toutes les sondes, l'administrateur peut - maintenant executer la commande : + maintenant executer la commande: &prompt.root; dtrace -l | more @@ -267,7 +267,7 @@ des informations systèmes. Il y a des scripts pour vérifier les fichiers ouvertes, la mémoire, l'usage du CPU et beaucoup plus. Il faut - extraire les scripts avec la commande suivante : + extraire les scripts avec la commande suivante: &prompt.root; gunzip -c DTracetoolkit* | tar xvf - >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: