From owner-cvs-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Dec 31 04:00:30 2008 Return-Path: Delivered-To: cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 035EE106566B; Wed, 31 Dec 2008 04:00:30 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from murray@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (repoman.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::29]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E6D658FC0C; Wed, 31 Dec 2008 04:00:29 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from murray@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.14.3/8.14.3) with ESMTP id mBV40T5d020524; Wed, 31 Dec 2008 04:00:29 GMT (envelope-from murray@repoman.freebsd.org) Received: (from murray@localhost) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.14.3/8.14.3/Submit) id mBV40Tgh020523; Wed, 31 Dec 2008 04:00:29 GMT (envelope-from murray) Message-Id: <200812310400.mBV40Tgh020523@repoman.freebsd.org> From: Murray Stokely Date: Wed, 31 Dec 2008 04:00:29 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org X-FreeBSD-CVS-Branch: HEAD Cc: Subject: cvs commit: www/en index.xsl X-BeenThere: cvs-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: CVS commit messages for the doc and www trees List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 31 Dec 2008 04:00:30 -0000 murray 2008-12-31 04:00:29 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en index.xsl Log: Improve the main paragraph on the front page of www.FreeBSD.org. We only have a few sentences so we should use it to describe why FreeBSD is relevant and interesting. Spending half of the paragraph listing 7 trademark symbols and the hardware platforms supported is not at all a compelling introduction to what is great about FreeBSD (to be fair it worked fine when we supported fewer platforms). Point out some of the FreeBSD highlights as succinctly as possible to entice users to click through to more of the second level pages: FreeBSD works on modern server, desktop, and embedded computer platforms, has great networking and security features, is used by some of the busiest web sites and most pervasive embedded devices, has over 30 years of continuous development, etc.. Add links to the platforms page and large users of FreeBSD section of the Handbook. Reviewed by: marketing@ (rwatson, mwlucas, gnn) Revision Changes Path 1.166 +30 -19 www/en/index.xsl