From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Sep 20 14:08:02 2004 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 729BE16A4CE; Mon, 20 Sep 2004 14:08:02 +0000 (GMT) Received: from shrike.submonkey.net (cpc2-cdif3-6-0-cust204.cdif.cable.ntl.com [81.103.67.204]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1CF7D43D48; Mon, 20 Sep 2004 14:08:02 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from setantae@submonkey.net) Received: from setantae by shrike.submonkey.net with local (Exim 4.42 (FreeBSD)) id 1C9Opk-0002v4-0o; Mon, 20 Sep 2004 15:08:00 +0100 Date: Mon, 20 Sep 2004 15:07:59 +0100 From: Ceri Davies To: Giorgos Keramidas Message-ID: <20040920140759.GD2493@submonkey.net> Mail-Followup-To: Ceri Davies , Giorgos Keramidas , Brad Davis , freebsd-doc@freebsd.org References: <20040918.161309.35654157.hrs@eos.ocn.ne.jp> <20040919105246.GW1538@submonkey.net> <200409191740.06579.so14k@so14k.com> <200409191905.56649.so14k@so14k.com> <20040920110628.GA2493@submonkey.net> <20040920133025.GB38865@orion.daedalusnetworks.priv> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha1; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="a2FkP9tdjPU2nyhF" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <20040920133025.GB38865@orion.daedalusnetworks.priv> X-PGP: finger ceri@FreeBSD.org User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.6i Sender: Ceri Davies cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: New firewall section (was: Re: HEADS UP: doc/ slush begins) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 20 Sep 2004 14:08:02 -0000 --a2FkP9tdjPU2nyhF Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Mon, Sep 20, 2004 at 04:30:25PM +0300, Giorgos Keramidas wrote: > On 2004-09-20 12:06, Ceri Davies wrote: > > > > Referring to ... http://freebsd.so14k.com/firewall/ > > > > Is everyone else happy (doceng/translators) if this were to go in before > > the release? >=20 > FWIW, the new text is definitely a lot more detailed than what we already= have > (which is absolutely GREAT) but it has many places where a bit of improve= ment > is needed :-/ >=20 > There are a few parts that I wanted to mail Brad about asking for extra > clarifications, rewordings, changes in the style and/or content of this. > I just didn't get a chance to read the entire chapter carefully. If you're available now, and would like to work at this, please do. I haven't read the whole patch yet either, and won't until this evening at the earliest. I pretty much only have evenings available for a good time from now. I'd rather this was correct before it gets committed, especially as I believe that the current text is simply less shiny as opposed to incorrect. Ceri --=20 It is not tinfoil, it is my new skin. I am a robot. --a2FkP9tdjPU2nyhF Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.2.6 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQFBTuQ/ocfcwTS3JF8RAoFcAJ0V8DKX7qXR0WHaNFxjbTChi6bWUwCeOpIP Shj5HG9YHm9PQmex9/jSDRs= =LMCV -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --a2FkP9tdjPU2nyhF--