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From: John Baldwin <jobaldwi@vt.edu>
To: Warner Losh <imp@FreeBSD.org>
Subject: RE: cvs commit: www/en/security security.sgml
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On 22-Sep-99 Warner Losh wrote:
> imp         1999/09/21 19:15:24 PDT
> 
>   Modified files:
>     en/security          security.sgml 
>   Log:
>   Add pointers to recent security advisories
>   bugtraq moved from geek-girl to securityfocus
>   "will" -> "we'll" in evil dwarves warning.
>   
>   Submitted by: "Keith R. Jarvis" <kjarvis@iss.net>
>   
>   Revision  Changes    Path
>   1.15      +10 -4     www/en/security/security.sgml

Someone correct me if I'm wrong, but I know that in doc/ we try to
avoid contractions as a general rule.  IOW, we would use "we will"
instead of "we'll".  This makes it easier on translators as well as
keeping the actual text just a tad bit clearer for readers who may not
be 100% fluent in English.  I'm not sure if this rule applies to www/
or not, but since we want our pages to be as easy to read as possible,
one would think that that rule applies here as well.

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