Date: Wed, 14 Jul 2010 17:40:52 -0400 From: Ben Kaduk <minimarmot@gmail.com> To: Attilio Rao <attilio@freebsd.org> Cc: svn-src-head@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, src-committers@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r210065 - head/usr.bin/gcore Message-ID: <AANLkTilQuRf5-IN_sCDfo6MwcFlJmIIHAB0m74aA9T1d@mail.gmail.com> In-Reply-To: <201007141746.o6EHkjme035443@svn.freebsd.org> References: <201007141746.o6EHkjme035443@svn.freebsd.org>
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On Wed, Jul 14, 2010 at 1:46 PM, Attilio Rao <attilio@freebsd.org> wrote: > Author: attilio > Date: Wed Jul 14 17:46:44 2010 > New Revision: 210065 > URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/210065 > > Log: > =A0Fix spelling. =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D > --- head/usr.bin/gcore/gcore.1 =A0Wed Jul 14 17:38:01 2010 =A0 =A0 =A0 = =A0(r210064) > +++ head/usr.bin/gcore/gcore.1 =A0Wed Jul 14 17:46:44 2010 =A0 =A0 =A0 = =A0(r210065) > @@ -64,11 +64,11 @@ Write the core file to the specified fil > =A0.Dq Pa core.<pid> . > =A0.It Fl f > =A0Dumps all the available segments, excluding only the malformed ones an= d > -un-dumpable ones. Differently from the default invocation, it also dumps > -device-mapped and sglist-mapped areas that may invalidate the state of > -some transactions. This flag, then, may be used very carefully, when the > -full behaviour of the application is full-understood and the fallouts ca= n > -be easilly controlled. > +un-dumpable ones. Unlike the default invocation, it also dumps > +device- and sglist-mapped areas that may invalidate the state of > +some transactions. This flag must be used very carefully, when the > +behavior of the application is fully understood and the fallouts can > +be easily controlled. > =A0.It Fl s > =A0Stop the process while gathering the core image, and resume it > =A0when done. Still has the style bug of not starting new sentences on new lines. Also, "fallout" should be singular, here. -Ben Kaduk
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