From owner-svn-src-head@freebsd.org Thu Jan 24 20:35:59 2019 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-src-head@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 84A2214BDA43; Thu, 24 Jan 2019 20:35:59 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from ngie@FreeBSD.org) Received: from mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:3]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-digest SHA256) (Client CN "mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org", Issuer "Let's Encrypt Authority X3" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 2C0E385CF9; Thu, 24 Jan 2019 20:35:59 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from ngie@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org (repo.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 1FF2B2DAA9; Thu, 24 Jan 2019 20:35:59 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from ngie@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.37]) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id x0OKZx6N052620; Thu, 24 Jan 2019 20:35:59 GMT (envelope-from ngie@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from ngie@localhost) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id x0OKZwxX052619; Thu, 24 Jan 2019 20:35:58 GMT (envelope-from ngie@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <201901242035.x0OKZwxX052619@repo.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: repo.freebsd.org: ngie set sender to ngie@FreeBSD.org using -f From: Enji Cooper Date: Thu, 24 Jan 2019 20:35:58 +0000 (UTC) To: src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r343412 - head/usr.sbin/freebsd-update X-SVN-Group: head X-SVN-Commit-Author: ngie X-SVN-Commit-Paths: head/usr.sbin/freebsd-update X-SVN-Commit-Revision: 343412 X-SVN-Commit-Repository: base MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-Rspamd-Queue-Id: 2C0E385CF9 X-Spamd-Bar: -- Authentication-Results: mx1.freebsd.org X-Spamd-Result: default: False [-2.96 / 15.00]; local_wl_from(0.00)[FreeBSD.org]; NEURAL_HAM_MEDIUM(-1.00)[-0.999,0]; NEURAL_HAM_LONG(-1.00)[-1.000,0]; NEURAL_HAM_SHORT(-0.97)[-0.965,0]; ASN(0.00)[asn:11403, ipnet:2610:1c1:1::/48, country:US] X-BeenThere: svn-src-head@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for the src tree for head/-current List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 24 Jan 2019 20:35:59 -0000 Author: ngie Date: Thu Jan 24 20:35:58 2019 New Revision: 343412 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/343412 Log: Fix a typo/wordsmith a description modified in r343407 r343407 accidentally introduced a typo (folling -> following). While reading the change out loud, I realized that the original sentence was wordy. almost sounding like a run-on sentence. Improve the flow by splitting up the two thoughts into two distinct sentence fragments. PR: 194547, 208497 Reviewed by: emaste Approved by: emaste (mentor) MFC after: 1 month MFC with: r343407 Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D18947 Modified: head/usr.sbin/freebsd-update/freebsd-update.sh Modified: head/usr.sbin/freebsd-update/freebsd-update.sh ============================================================================== --- head/usr.sbin/freebsd-update/freebsd-update.sh Thu Jan 24 18:51:15 2019 (r343411) +++ head/usr.sbin/freebsd-update/freebsd-update.sh Thu Jan 24 20:35:58 2019 (r343412) @@ -1959,8 +1959,9 @@ fetch_create_manifest () { # Report to the user if any updates were avoided due to local changes if [ -s modifiedfiles ]; then cat - modifiedfiles <<- EOF | ${PAGER} - The folling files are affected by updates but no changes have - been downloaded because the files have been modified locally: + The following files are affected by updates. No changes have + been downloaded, however, because the files have been modified + locally: EOF fi rm modifiedfiles