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Date:      Thu, 24 Jan 2019 20:35:58 +0000 (UTC)
From:      Enji Cooper <ngie@FreeBSD.org>
To:        src-committers@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, svn-src-head@freebsd.org
Subject:   svn commit: r343412 - head/usr.sbin/freebsd-update
Message-ID:  <201901242035.x0OKZwxX052619@repo.freebsd.org>

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Author: ngie
Date: Thu Jan 24 20:35:58 2019
New Revision: 343412
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/343412

Log:
  Fix a typo/wordsmith a description modified in r343407
  
  r343407 accidentally introduced a typo (folling -> following). While
  reading the change out loud, I realized that the original sentence was
  wordy. almost sounding like a run-on sentence.
  
  Improve the flow by splitting up the two thoughts into two distinct sentence
  fragments.
  
  PR:		194547, 208497
  Reviewed by:	emaste
  Approved by:	emaste (mentor)
  MFC after:	1 month
  MFC with:	r343407
  Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D18947

Modified:
  head/usr.sbin/freebsd-update/freebsd-update.sh

Modified: head/usr.sbin/freebsd-update/freebsd-update.sh
==============================================================================
--- head/usr.sbin/freebsd-update/freebsd-update.sh	Thu Jan 24 18:51:15 2019	(r343411)
+++ head/usr.sbin/freebsd-update/freebsd-update.sh	Thu Jan 24 20:35:58 2019	(r343412)
@@ -1959,8 +1959,9 @@ fetch_create_manifest () {
 	# Report to the user if any updates were avoided due to local changes
 	if [ -s modifiedfiles ]; then
 		cat - modifiedfiles <<- EOF | ${PAGER}
-			The folling files are affected by updates but no changes have
-			been downloaded because the files have been modified locally:
+			The following files are affected by updates. No changes have
+			been downloaded, however, because the files have been modified
+			locally:
 		EOF
 	fi
 	rm modifiedfiles



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