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Author: sevan
Date: Sun Aug 27 22:21:25 2017
New Revision: 50754
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/50754

Log:
  Make recommendation succinctly.
  
  Submitted by:	delphij
  Reviewed by:	delphij
  Approved by:	wblock (mentor)
  Differential Revision:	https://reviews.freebsd.org/D11606

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/security/security.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/security/security.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/security/security.xml	Sun Aug 27 18:36:18 2017	(r50753)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/security/security.xml	Sun Aug 27 22:21:25 2017	(r50754)
@@ -135,10 +135,9 @@
     branch or release will end.  Please note that these dates may be
     pushed back if circumstances warrant it.</p>
 
-  <p>Older releases are not maintained and users are strongly
-    encouraged to upgrade to one of the supported releases mentioned
-    above.  A list of unsupported releases can be found <a
-      href="unsupported.html">here</a>.</p>
+  <p><a href="unsupported.html">Older releases</a>
+    are not supported and users are strongly
+    encouraged to upgrade to one of these supported releases:</p>
 
   <!--
       Please also update head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releng/index.xml