From owner-cvs-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Jul 11 09:15:32 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org Delivered-To: cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9EB4916A400; Wed, 11 Jul 2007 09:15:32 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from blackend@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (repoman.freebsd.org [69.147.83.41]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7766113C447; Wed, 11 Jul 2007 09:15:32 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from blackend@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.13.8/8.13.8) with ESMTP id l6B9FWCJ080227; Wed, 11 Jul 2007 09:15:32 GMT (envelope-from blackend@repoman.freebsd.org) Received: (from blackend@localhost) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.13.8/8.13.8/Submit) id l6B9FW7e080226; Wed, 11 Jul 2007 09:15:32 GMT (envelope-from blackend) Message-Id: <200707110915.l6B9FW7e080226@repoman.freebsd.org> From: Marc Fonvieille Date: Wed, 11 Jul 2007 09:15:31 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org X-FreeBSD-CVS-Branch: HEAD Cc: Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/desktop chapter.sgml X-BeenThere: cvs-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: CVS commit messages for the doc and www trees List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 11 Jul 2007 09:15:32 -0000 blackend 2007-07-11 09:15:31 UTC FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/desktop chapter.sgml Log: Various grammar and style fixes. PR: docs/114363 Submitted by: Ben Kaduk Revision Changes Path 1.73 +45 -40 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/desktop/chapter.sgml