From owner-freebsd-doc Mon Oct 14 19: 8:11 2002 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 8A4EE37B401 for ; Mon, 14 Oct 2002 19:08:10 -0700 (PDT) Received: from rogelior.dyndns.org (lsanca1-ar19-4-46-082-020.lsanca1.dsl-verizon.net [4.46.82.20]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5BDA743EAF for ; Mon, 14 Oct 2002 19:08:06 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from rogelio@rogelior.dyndns.org) Received: from rogelior.dyndns.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by rogelior.dyndns.org (8.12.6/8.12.6) with ESMTP id g9F2DNp9093979 for ; Mon, 14 Oct 2002 19:13:23 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from rogelio@rogelior.dyndns.org) Received: (from rogelio@localhost) by rogelior.dyndns.org (8.12.6/8.12.6/Submit) id g9F2DNHk093978 for doc@freebsd.org; Mon, 14 Oct 2002 19:13:23 -0700 (PDT) Date: Mon, 14 Oct 2002 19:13:19 -0700 From: Rogelio Rodriguez To: doc@freebsd.org Subject: (English) syntax question (handbook-related) Message-ID: <20021015021319.GH48094@rogelior.dyndns.org> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=iso-8859-1; format=flowed Content-Disposition: inline User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.1i Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org Hi, In the first sentence of the second paragraph of the preface to the hanbook (that's certainly a mouthful) it seems (to me) that there is a syntax error. "Once you have travelled this far" acts like a conjunctive phrase (in this sentence) but there appears to be need for it. A cursory reading reveals no errors but it is probably more correct (and easier to read) without it. That's my opinion, anyway. :) -- Rogelio Rodriguez To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message