From owner-svn-doc-head@FreeBSD.ORG Fri May 23 17:36:55 2014 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [8.8.178.115]) (using TLSv1 with cipher ADH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 24EA368D; Fri, 23 May 2014 17:36:55 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 0600024BF; Fri, 23 May 2014 17:36:55 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.8/8.14.8) with ESMTP id s4NHasWl057757; Fri, 23 May 2014 17:36:54 GMT (envelope-from bcr@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from bcr@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.8/8.14.8/Submit) id s4NHasQ6057756; Fri, 23 May 2014 17:36:54 GMT (envelope-from bcr@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201405231736.s4NHasQ6057756@svn.freebsd.org> From: Benedict Reuschling Date: Fri, 23 May 2014 17:36:54 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r44923 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/solid-state X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.18 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for the doc tree for head List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 23 May 2014 17:36:55 -0000 Author: bcr Date: Fri May 23 17:36:54 2014 New Revision: 44923 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44923 Log: Capitalize words in title tags, remove redundant words and rewrite one sentence in the process. This makes this file igor clean. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/solid-state/article.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/solid-state/article.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/solid-state/article.xml Fri May 23 17:28:33 2014 (r44922) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/solid-state/article.xml Fri May 23 17:36:54 2014 (r44923) @@ -167,10 +167,10 @@ pseudo-device md # memory those directories. In the execution of /etc/rc.d/var, one other rc.conf variable comes into play – - varsize. The - /etc/rc.d/var file creates a - /var partition based on the value of - this variable in rc.conf: + varsize. A /var + partition is created by /etc/rc.d/var based + on the value of this variable in + rc.conf: varsize=8192 @@ -189,7 +189,7 @@ pseudo-device md # memory logging or temporary file creation and destruction can do the same. Therefore, in addition to removing the swap entry from your - /etc/fstab file, you should also change the + /etc/fstab, you should also change the Options field for each filesystem to ro as follows: @@ -221,7 +221,7 @@ pseudo-device md # memory - Building a File System From Scratch + Building a File System from Scratch Because ATA compatible compact-flash cards are seen by &os; as normal IDE hard drives, you could theoretically install &os; @@ -251,30 +251,30 @@ pseudo-device md # memory - Partitioning your flash media device + Partitioning Your Flash Media Device After booting with the kern and mfsroot floppies, choose custom from the installation menu. In the custom installation menu, choose partition. In the partition menu, you - should delete all existing partitions using the - d key. After deleting all existing - partitions, create a partition using the c - key and accept the default value for the size of the + should delete all existing partitions using + d. After deleting all existing + partitions, create a partition using c + and accept the default value for the size of the partition. When asked for the type of the partition, make sure the value is set to 165. Now write - this partition table to the disk by pressing the - w key (this is a hidden option on this + this partition table to the disk by pressing + w (this is a hidden option on this screen). If you are using an ATA compatible compact flash card, you should choose the &os; Boot Manager. Now press - the q key to quit the partition menu. You + q to quit the partition menu. You will be shown the boot manager menu once more - repeat the choice you made earlier. - Creating filesystems on your flash memory - device + Creating Filesystems on Your Flash Memory + Device Exit the custom installation menu, and from the main installation menu choose the fixit @@ -302,7 +302,7 @@ pseudo-device md # memory - Placing your filesystem on the flash media + Placing Your Filesystem on the Flash Media Mount the newly prepared flash media: @@ -364,7 +364,7 @@ pseudo-device md # memory the Apache web server will be provided. - cron + Cron Upon boot, /var gets populated by /etc/rc.d/var using the list from @@ -391,7 +391,7 @@ pseudo-device md # memory - syslog + Syslog syslog.conf specifies the locations of certain log files that exist in