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From: Joel Dahl <joel@automatvapen.se>
Subject: Re: docs/74720: [patch] Handbook: More corrections to the firewall
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The following reply was made to PR docs/74720; it has been noted by GNATS.

From: Joel Dahl <joel@automatvapen.se>
To: Len Zettel <zettel@acm.org>
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Subject: Re: docs/74720: [patch] Handbook: More corrections to the firewall
	chapter
Date: Mon, 06 Dec 2004 14:11:30 +0100

 On Sun, 2004-12-05 at 21:43 +0000, Len Zettel wrote:
 > So while you were at it, why not go a little further----
 
 Are you volunteering to help clean up this chapter? :-)
 
 I've focused on correcting obvious things like bad grammar and
 misspellings, but I've left out style changes, like rewordings and such.
 
 Yes, I could probably correct everything in one big megapatch and wait
 for it to get committed, if I had more time to carefully read the hole
 chapter (it's long and it's easy to miss errors, just ask the author),
 but I'm not paid to do this you know, I'm merely doing this because I've
 been using FreeBSD for a long time, and I think that it's about time
 that I give something back to the Project.