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From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@ceid.upatras.gr>
To: Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net>, Brad Davis <so14k@so14k.com>,
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Subject: Re: New firewall section (was: Re: HEADS UP: doc/ slush begins)
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On 2004-09-20 15:07, Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net> wrote:
> On Mon, Sep 20, 2004 at 04:30:25PM +0300, Giorgos Keramidas wrote:
> > On 2004-09-20 12:06, Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net> wrote:
> > >
> > > Referring to ... http://freebsd.so14k.com/firewall/
> > >
> > > Is everyone else happy (doceng/translators) if this were to go in before
> > > the release?
> >
> > There are a few parts that I wanted to mail Brad about asking for extra
> > clarifications, rewordings, changes in the style and/or content of this.
> > I just didn't get a chance to read the entire chapter carefully.
>
> If you're available now, and would like to work at this, please do.

I'm at work, so there's an upper limit of the time I can spend on
`other' tasks, but I'll try to send you a review until later tonight :)