From owner-freebsd-doc Sun Jun 11 12:59:57 2000 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from aragorn.neomedia.it (aragorn.neomedia.it [195.103.207.6]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A76B137B911 for ; Sun, 11 Jun 2000 12:59:45 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from bartequi@neomedia.it) Received: from bartequi.ottodomain.org (ppp1-pa5.neomedia.it [195.103.207.113]) by aragorn.neomedia.it (8.9.3/8.9.3) with SMTP id VAA30427; Sun, 11 Jun 2000 21:59:38 +0200 (CEST) From: Salvo Bartolotta Date: Sun, 11 Jun 2000 21:01:11 GMT Message-ID: <20000611.21011100@bartequi.ottodomain.org> Subject: Re: docs/19186: Semi-overhaul docs.html To: Daniel Harris Cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG In-Reply-To: <3943A11B.CA085B@subdimension.com> References: <200006102350.QAA07428@freefall.freebsd.org> <20000611.12230300@bartequi.ottodomain.org> <3943A11B.CA085B@subdimension.com> X-Mailer: SuperCalifragilis X-Priority: 3 (Normal) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk X-Loop: FreeBSD.org >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Original Message <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< On 6/11/00, 3:24:27 PM, Daniel Harris wrote regarding Re: docs/19186: Semi-overhaul docs.html: > How about just rewriting the whole sentence ... example for the > 4.4Docs: > `` > If you like to read BSD manuals online, here is a hypertext version of= > the 4.4BSD documents from /usr/share/doc, where you will find the > documents on a FreeBSD machine (if you install the doc distribution). > '' Sounds good :-) The (compound) sentence is simple and "linear". The clause introduced by where sounds (to me) as a coordinated main clause (where you will find ... =3D and there you will find ...). Others might probably prefer "if you have installed", but I am afraid this is just a matter of taste. I hope we have missed nothing else ... Best regards, Salvo To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message