From owner-freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Tue May 22 13:30:23 2018 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 776A1EF5C1F for ; Tue, 22 May 2018 13:30:23 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from tom@bloggingemail.com) Received: from mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (mailman.ysv.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::50:5]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0D3FB74551 for ; Tue, 22 May 2018 13:30:23 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from tom@bloggingemail.com) Received: by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) id C1486EF5C1E; Tue, 22 May 2018 13:30:22 +0000 (UTC) Delivered-To: doc@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 9ED07EF5C1D for ; Tue, 22 May 2018 13:30:22 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from tom@bloggingemail.com) Received: from homiemail-a96.g.dreamhost.com (homie-sub4.mail.dreamhost.com [69.163.253.135]) (using TLSv1.1 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 19F8674550 for ; Tue, 22 May 2018 13:30:21 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from tom@bloggingemail.com) Received: from homiemail-a96.g.dreamhost.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by homiemail-a96.g.dreamhost.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 574A1C00292D for ; Tue, 22 May 2018 06:30:20 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha1; c=relaxed; d=bloggingemail.com; h=date :to:from:reply-to:subject:message-id:mime-version:content-type :content-transfer-encoding; s=bloggingemail.com; bh=xX3HRT2xgTg9 JKnmRd3Ild9+LAI=; b=UZsxaLrg51EclF914Cd1cJZMTFbYlYeyNxdcEmGEhBiq gjAbYQnd+ywSVHxtBYWsYNW8EqJ6WSAMur3K6HrGTLNSxrEtZ/KQheBbRNA1VAgA QJ5AQ4lUffCxqbNWzTcFdSXb1do2kAq8PbTqzrBerWozSwvqzL6m/o5KSbEIXfo= Received: from bloggingemail.com (ec2-54-81-244-86.compute-1.amazonaws.com [54.81.244.86]) (Authenticated sender: tom@bloggingemail.com) by homiemail-a96.g.dreamhost.com (Postfix) with ESMTPA id 20521C00292A for ; Tue, 22 May 2018 06:30:20 -0700 (PDT) Date: Tue, 22 May 2018 13:30:19 +0000 To: doc@FreeBSD.org From: Tom Howard Reply-To: Tom Howard Subject: Following up Message-ID: <18311509.or_mail@bloggingemail.com> X-Priority: 3 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-Content-Filtered-By: Mailman/MimeDel 2.1.26 X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.26 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 22 May 2018 13:30:23 -0000 Hi,=20 I just wanted to follow up in case you missed my email from the other day= . Please see below: On Tue, May 15, 2018 at 11:21 AM, Tom Howard wr= ote: =09 Hello, You might not have seen but you=E2=80=99ve got a broken link on this page= - https://www.cfenns.ath.cx/freebsd/doc/fr_FR.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer= /writing-style.html The broken link (http://www.columbia.edu/acis/bartleby/strunk/) is suppos= ed to go to the excellent =E2=80=98elements of style=E2=80=99 book by Str= unk and White which can still be accessed at https://faculty.washington.e= du/heagerty/Courses/b572/public/StrunkWhite.pdf=20 Perhaps when you update your page you might also be interested in adding = this link (https://blogging.im/better_writing)? It=E2=80=99s our list of = useful writing resources which your visitors may also find helpful. I hope this helps, please let me know if you have any questions. Thanks, Tom --- Tom Howard Community ManagerIf you'd rather not hear from us in future, please reply= with unsubscribe in the subject line. Blogging.com, Winterfeldtstr., 21 Berlin, 10781, Germany =09 Don't want emails from us anymore? Reply to this email with the word "U= NSUBSCRIBE" in the subject line. Blogging.com, Winterfeldtstr., 21 Berlin, 10781, Germany