From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Nov 25 13:44:04 2008 Return-Path: Delivered-To: doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 165F6106567A for ; Tue, 25 Nov 2008 13:44:04 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from sonic2000gr@gmail.com) Received: from ik-out-1112.google.com (ik-out-1112.google.com [66.249.90.178]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 972FC8FC25 for ; Tue, 25 Nov 2008 13:44:03 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from sonic2000gr@gmail.com) Received: by ik-out-1112.google.com with SMTP id c21so2086358ika.3 for ; Tue, 25 Nov 2008 05:44:02 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:message-id:date:from :user-agent:mime-version:to:cc:subject:references:in-reply-to :content-type:content-transfer-encoding; bh=iYzAoINA8pJBmt9yq4RwC9Sq936DEhZOY+4OWptv3aU=; b=D5e75Xz8PYj2aLBHVyTFV/FlOXi/rip8IPV0KU2J4yiJ1Mv+dO246vfD771ZvCGspJ Ac43iMHFimrEKu28fdAm+O6hVfhLgJ2QMuA9T/7sNwIRgycIdtxT/DRadw8ePjvrkOh8 aP1PdIKapjjIYn+IiFHPlNfJoej0JfnrYbkHw= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=message-id:date:from:user-agent:mime-version:to:cc:subject :references:in-reply-to:content-type:content-transfer-encoding; b=UikhesF4l4vWPoOUjWZlAGibgsCpgnPoA3hcAlYHBJ86eMY5W4QPZR0U3Qk8cLUVOI Sz9jP+9QCrmJpowp7hcbBqi139helKMOpyQjjn2On3fq/vLZsUfwHvVL9v0OuE4hSJs8 JeVOy/w2qo8rxXBAK30ISpV8iSwo9LWW8CoDs= Received: by 10.210.25.19 with SMTP id 19mr1952122eby.114.1227620642374; Tue, 25 Nov 2008 05:44:02 -0800 (PST) Received: from atlantis.dyndns.org (athedsl-425998.home.otenet.gr [79.131.216.12]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPS id i4sm85063nfh.1.2008.11.25.05.43.59 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=RC4-MD5); Tue, 25 Nov 2008 05:44:01 -0800 (PST) Message-ID: <492C011D.4040707@gmail.com> Date: Tue, 25 Nov 2008 15:43:57 +0200 From: Manolis Kiagias User-Agent: Thunderbird 2.0.0.17 (X11/20081011) MIME-Version: 1.0 To: Giorgos Keramidas References: <20081124153358.7a539e67.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> <492B2D8C.4090807@gmail.com> <20081125.102512.193370295.hrs@allbsd.org> <492B7E8E.4070508@gmail.com> <873ahggs02.fsf@kobe.laptop> In-Reply-To: <873ahggs02.fsf@kobe.laptop> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Cc: trhodes@freebsd.org, doc@freebsd.org, pgj@freebsd.org, gabor@kovesdan.org, remko@freebsd.org Subject: Re: A patch for the 'geom' chapter X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 25 Nov 2008 13:44:04 -0000 Giorgos Keramidas wrote: > On Tue, 25 Nov 2008 06:26:54 +0200, Manolis Kiagias wrote: > >> Hiroki Sato wrote: >> >>> Manolis Kiagias wrote >>> in <492B2D8C.4090807@gmail.com>: >>> >>> so> After our discussion, here again is the "second take" of this patch: >>> so> >>> so> http://people.freebsd.org/~manolis/geom.txt >>> >>> One thing: >>> >>> + Permanent labels can be created with the tunefs >>> + or newfs commands. They will then be created >>> >>> I think the &man.tunefs.8; and &man.newfs.8; are better than >>> foo here. >>> >> True, will change these. >> > > I just finished reading the new patch. Excellent work :) > Thanks :) > Just a minor point that may make the gjournal parts friendlier to mirror > admins. You don't have to hardcode `www.freebsd.org' or the path to the > gjournal article into the Handbook. > > This part: > > + Please refer to the article + url="http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/gjournal-desktop">Implementing UFS Journaling on a Desktop PC > + for detailed instructions on this task. > > Can be written as: > > + Please refer to the article + url="&url.articles.gjournal-desktop;">Implementing UFS Journaling on > + a Desktop PC for detailed instructions on this task. > > I have updated `doc/share/sgml/urls.ent' to include URL entities for our > current set of articles, including gjournal-desktop, so if you update > from CVS the patch should build fine either way. > > Patch approved by me too. > > > I knew there would be another way for this long link. Thanks, I'll change it and will probably commit later today. Many thanks to anyone who took the time to review this! manolis@