From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Feb 26 20:50:01 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@smarthost.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 09700A04 for ; Tue, 26 Feb 2013 20:50:01 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206c::16:87]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id E195A1EB2 for ; Tue, 26 Feb 2013 20:50:00 +0000 (UTC) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.6/8.14.6) with ESMTP id r1QKo0rU069062 for ; Tue, 26 Feb 2013 20:50:00 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.6/8.14.6/Submit) id r1QKo0Ap069056; Tue, 26 Feb 2013 20:50:00 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Tue, 26 Feb 2013 20:50:00 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <201302262050.r1QKo0Ap069056@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, Tom Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5C67D9AD for ; Tue, 26 Feb 2013 20:49:04 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from nobody@FreeBSD.org) Received: from red.freebsd.org (red.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::22]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 374BC1EA1 for ; Tue, 26 Feb 2013 20:49:04 +0000 (UTC) Received: from red.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by red.freebsd.org (8.14.5/8.14.5) with ESMTP id r1QKn3El048391 for ; Tue, 26 Feb 2013 20:49:03 GMT (envelope-from nobody@red.freebsd.org) Received: (from nobody@localhost) by red.freebsd.org (8.14.5/8.14.5/Submit) id r1QKn3MQ048390; Tue, 26 Feb 2013 20:49:03 GMT (envelope-from nobody) Message-Id: <201302262049.r1QKn3MQ048390@red.freebsd.org> Date: Tue, 26 Feb 2013 20:49:03 GMT From: Tom To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: www-3.1 Subject: docs/176451: (patch) Handbook Ch 25.7 typos and incidental edits X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 26 Feb 2013 20:50:01 -0000 >Number: 176451 >Category: docs >Synopsis: (patch) Handbook Ch 25.7 typos and incidental edits >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Tue Feb 26 20:50:00 UTC 2013 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Tom >Release: 9.1-RELEASE GENERIC >Organization: N/A >Environment: >Description: Suggested corrections to typos and incidental editing of FreeBSD Handbook, Chapter 25, Section 7. Ref: /en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml (r41051) >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: Patch attached. Patch attached with submission follows: --- /usr/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/cutting-edge/chapter.xml 2013-02-18 13:25:18.000000000 -0500 +++ chapter.xml 2013-02-26 14:42:20.000000000 -0500 @@ -1813,8 +1813,8 @@ up-to-date, refer to for detailed help about synchronizing to a newer version. - Updating the system from source is a more subtle than - it might initially seem to be, and the &os; developers have + Updating the system from source is a more subtle process + than it might initially seem to be, and the &os; developers have found it necessary over the years to change the recommended approach fairly dramatically as new kinds of unavoidable dependencies come to light. The rest of this section @@ -1858,7 +1858,7 @@ - Some configuration changes must be done before the new + Some configuration changes must be made before the new world is installed, but others might break the old world. Hence, two different configuration upgrade steps are generally needed. @@ -1946,7 +1946,7 @@ mergemaster Repeated to update the remaining configuration files, - not that the new world is on disk. + now that the new world is on disk. @@ -2217,7 +2217,7 @@ Do not save the output in /tmp as this directory may be cleared at next reboot. A better place to save the file is - /var/tmpor in + /var/tmp or in root's home directory. @@ -2234,8 +2234,7 @@ To rebuild the world, use &man.make.1;. This command reads instructions from the Makefile, which describes how the programs that comprise &os; should - be rebuilt and the order in which they should be - built. + be built and the order in which they should be built. The general format of the command is as follows: @@ -2542,7 +2541,7 @@ Manual Update - To instead perform the update manually, do not just copy + To perform the update manually instead, do not just copy over the files from /usr/src/etc to /etc and expect it to @@ -2580,7 +2579,7 @@ Next, build a dummy set of directories to install the new /etc and other - files into. /var/tmp/root is a reasonable choice: @@ -2898,7 +2897,7 @@ Turn off profiling by setting NO_PROFILE=true in - /etc/make.conf). + /etc/make.conf. >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: