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Author: bcr
Date: Sat May 24 20:44:43 2014
New Revision: 44944
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/44944

Log:
  Remove some redundant words, add capitalization to titles, as well as
  redundant markup and words around <filename>.

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml	Sat May 24 20:33:49 2014	(r44943)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml	Sat May 24 20:44:43 2014	(r44944)
@@ -306,7 +306,7 @@ You need a Passphrase to protect your se
   </sect1>
 
   <sect1 xml:id="kerberos-ldap">
-    <title>Kerberos and LDAP web password for &os; cluster</title>
+    <title>Kerberos and LDAP web Password for &os; Cluster</title>
 
     <para>Some of the services in the &os; cluster require a Kerberos
       password.  In the &os; cluster, LDAP is proxying to Kerberos, so
@@ -1866,7 +1866,7 @@ U    stable/9/share/man/man4/netmap.4
 &prompt.user; <userinput>cd sendmail</userinput>
 &prompt.user; <userinput>svn merge -c r<replaceable>261190</replaceable> ^/vendor/<replaceable>sendmail/dist</replaceable> .</userinput></screen>
 
-	    <para><literal>^</literal> is an alias for the the
+	    <para><literal>^</literal> is an alias for the
 	      repository path.</para>
 	  </tip>
 
@@ -3027,9 +3027,9 @@ Relnotes:           yes</programlisting>
 	  or
 	  <filename>$HOME/.ssh/id_rsa.pub</filename>)
 	  to the person setting you up as a committer so it can be put
-	  into the
+	  into
 	  <filename><replaceable>yourlogin</replaceable></filename>
-	  file in
+	  in
 	  <filename>/etc/ssh-keys/</filename> on
 	  <systemitem>freefall</systemitem>.</para>
       </step>
@@ -3101,8 +3101,8 @@ Relnotes:           yes</programlisting>
       <listitem>
 	<para>Respect existing maintainers (if listed in the
 	  <varname>MAINTAINER</varname> field in
-	  <filename>Makefile</filename> or in the
-	  <filename>MAINTAINER</filename> file in the top-level
+	  <filename>Makefile</filename> or in
+	  <filename>MAINTAINER</filename> in the top-level
 	  directory).</para>
       </listitem>